 Politix - Eclipse |
Politix 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Eclipse' and post your comments here!!!
been working on this one for a while now and I think its time to get some other opinions about it. I hope you guys like it!
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18-08-2005 17:32 |
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anf0 D
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the intro synth is alright...
the bongo congas, u need to change up the volicity... the distorted kick is alright...
the bellish synth is abit high in level. the mellodies/riffs are nice...
could probably do with a better bass synth/sample.
normalize the levels... coming through abit high. causing much distortion. the bass does get much better tthen the one in the intro...
some cool ideas... just need to tweak the sound abit... get it sounding nice and normal for any system it is playd on.
keep it up mate. 
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19-08-2005 01:52 |
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Politix
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thanks man, i was having a problem with the sounds, especial that bass. will try to work it and the leveling.
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19-08-2005 03:05 |
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equipped
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Good intro. Could be longer imo. The synth at>1:04 is a wee bit to loud. Bass has no beef. Drop certianly could use more insanity. Dig the bass at>2:26, need's to be turned up though. Structure is good. Think i hear some bongo's around >4:05? Bring them up a bit. Heard some distrorting at>6:24. Nice producing Politix, need's some work but you certianly have a good ear for what sound's phat so a
for that. Cheers man! 
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19-08-2005 04:54 |
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Surya
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Intro isn't special but OK.
Kick sounds too digital
Melody coming in: quite dreamy stuff. Maybe give it some more reverb?
Bassline coming in: sounds like the bassline of a 1992 house track, not feelin that...
Pads: nice, but they fit in the same 1992 house mood...
Distorted bassline coming in: dunno, somethings wrong with the sound, sounds all clipped and stuff. Doesn't sound cool or phat, just not very good.
Drums kicking back in: they're being quite overpowered by the other stuff, except for the hats.
Imo this sounds more like a speeded up oldskool trance track with breakbeats than DnB, not really feelin it.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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19-08-2005 10:58 |
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xplosion
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yeah, it's starts nice, very promising,...
0:21 - don't really like that tockle sound
further, the melodies aren't catchy enough, altough the drums are fine. You should use less sounds and more structure.
Watch out for that distortion when bass meets kick
Keep on going !!
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13-09-2005 14:01 |
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shadraq
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intro's to long there's some good sounds but the quality needs fixin up and there's a sudden change at 3:12, use a few more sounds and sort the arrangement out n see where you get then mate...
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