Too Late - SAR!N vs Leroy

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Too Late - SAR!N vs Leroy

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SARIN

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Please check out my latest tune Too Late
It's not mastered yet, but the tune is besides that completely finished.
It's a bit of a techie roller....

Enjoy

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18-08-2005 17:13

SARIN

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No comments yet.

Is it that bad...?

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19-08-2005 10:23

Surya

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Originally posted by SARIN
Is it that bad...?

Yeah

Nah, nice intro, like the snare.
Cool vocoding too, wondering what the text is...

Ah, cool bassteaser Big Grin

Or is it a hoover? Anyway, cool Big Grin

Bandpassed bassling coming in, quite cool

Drop: sweet bassline man! The snare could use a small boost though, it's overpowered by the hats, which are quite loud.

Good track!

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19-08-2005 10:53

SARIN

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Thx Surya,
I know the final mix hasn't been done yet, I was still wondering if the tune itself was completely finished and what the people thoughts were on it.
I always listen to a tune first and if that's cool, than listen to the quality of the mix....as you prob know, you can make or break a tune with mastering.
So I know you like the track, but the hihats are still a bit overpowering.
I will be working on that, anyway I appreciate your feedback.

Cheers,

SAR!N

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19-08-2005 11:32

D2o

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like the intro beat......bit represent like....cool

it should stay like that for longer i think befor it drops into the straight beat.....either that or make the rhythm a bit more interesting than just
bd---sn-----bd-sn
i know i'm i major culprit for that style but when you start with such a complicated pattern it seams a bit life less once you move to the other.......
i not trying to get on ur back cus i like the drums just that it changes a bit too abruptly.

the sounds in the intro are cool like the panned chopy bit.....
the distorted vocode bits really cool......
maybe take a little treble of your hi hat (the 8th hat).......
like the drop really good mate Bigup

like the sound on the lead nice and tearing....maybe keep it in for longer it dissapers a little early....
the way it goes in to the middle break is smart.....
like that bass tone cool..... Bigup

whats that weird sound that come in after the second drop?....not too keen with it over te top of the other lead but when it on its own it ok.....
a tune with an outro cool nicely done....

very good chap, very good indeed.
like you said your self it needs a touch up on the mix but this is very cool.
the only problem is that you don't use the intro pattern on the drums enough in the rest of the track
but thats it really
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by D2o: 19-08-2005 14:25.

19-08-2005 14:24

SARIN

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Thanks alot for the review Jimmy C, that is a really good feedback.
And maybe I should use the beginning break a bit more, but I have tried to do that, but it slows the tune a little and with this, as you mention a bit boring break, it speeds up a little.
But I'll review that again, maybe my taste has changed.

Cheers,

SAR!N

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19-08-2005 18:48

SARIN

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Anyone else has some good ideas...
Please let me know.

Thanks

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27-08-2005 17:25

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