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Danny Jenk D-Pitch
Registration Date: 24-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'D-Pitch - Fear (unfinnished 60%)' and post your comments here!!!
started this 3 days ago, had no feedback yet so would love any coments..
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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17-08-2005 23:02 |
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Darkside
Old-School Rolla
Registration Date: 02-01-2005
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that avatar there is pretty twisted.
anyway, the track. intro: symphonic strings are nice, beeps are ok but you should add one sound in there that holds it all together.
amen...another amen track huh? ok lets get on with it.
vocals are alright.
bassline is nice. but i definitely don't like the way you chopped that amen.
just personal preference tho.
some of the sounds dont flow with it so well, some of the ones you use during the changeups, they stand out too much.
drop is cool, then you go into that big slow half-speed thing for the outro...goes on a bit too long for what it is.
and then its over.
well it was ok but there were some things i had problems with.
hope you take some of my advice for the final version.
7/10
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18-08-2005 02:33 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Nice soundfx/backingsounds: strings, pwiiip
Crisp drums, both in the intro as in the rest of the track, but they lack a bit in groove or 'steadyness' - as in a loop(player) with the decay held too short, but that's a matter of taste maybe.
bass sound overpowers the vocal samples, throughout the track you could modulate that bass sound a bit perhaps? It's digital - which is ok - but a slightly more aggresive sound would be very well placed here.
But all the atmospheres/drums/bass combined make it solid track for sure.
NO COPYRIGHTED SAMPLES PLEASE - remove them and upload the clean version again
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18-08-2005 12:48 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Nice atmos in the intr
Bass coming in: don't like the sound of it. Sounds way too digital.
Nice drums, but still disliking the bassline.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-08-2005 14:42 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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yeah nice atmo sounds...
not feeling the bass that much... but its not that bad, comes down to personal taste. but nice arrangment n shit... the drums are alright. i woudnt mind hearing more ppl try make their own phat drums. cool tune though. i listend to it a few times enjoying it for what it is.
keep it up mate 
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19-08-2005 02:07 |
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joshmccann
Newbie
Registration Date: 21-08-2005
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Good track. I liked the bassline a lot. Your pads and fx were good. Drumline was great but the fills just seemed off beat for some reason. I'd give you a 9 out of ten good work.
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21-08-2005 19:11 |
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Darklite
Newbie
Registration Date: 16-02-2005
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filter on the drumz sounds cool the electrical bass in the intro is sweet. very fast intro could probly be streched a little the break is longer the the intro i think. its not really my style of d n b but its pretty cool. i think the drums are a bit loud or just to much hi frequency should give it some more eq's. it ends a bit sudden gotta restructure this 1 i think good work tho wicked ideas keep it up.
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15-09-2005 01:03 |
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S.O.T.A.
SHADOW STAR
Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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Nice I really like your intro. Sounds are excellant. Great sample. Bassline is pretty cool I was waiting for it to go crazy with some dark ass bass. The pads that come back in are nice.Second breakdown is cool. You should make a track with me do you use reason??
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15-09-2005 19:10 |
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