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davieb1 
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Registration Date: 04-08-2005
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Please check out my new track 'wollaby' and post your comments here!!!
Old tune i know it sounds dodgy as hel but would like to know what you think, cheers. dave
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17-08-2005 13:50 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Bass line is sick 
and the drum's are niclely edited but that synth sound at>2:11 has to go! 
Very crappy on such a sick soundin track! Level's are off, can't hear amen cymlz. That bass line is funky ass shit! 
Sound's really good with the drum's. Nice work man this could be phat if you get some better sound's and sort out those level's. Cheers 
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17-08-2005 19:41 |
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Soi
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Initial bass-sound is a straight preset from Reason's subtractor, innit? 
Like that sound tho.
Ok, i only hear smaurai-like cymbals, but almost no kicks, and your snares have a too stroong 'fft' sound, make them go 'K-LANG'
Quantise your (sub)bass onto your kicks to make a more solid groove
or rather, quantise your bassline, it takes some time to create a fully swinging and personal b-line, but hey, it's d'n'b so you should go deeper into that matter.
I like yer sounds, the way you manipulate them and stuff.
Postmodern fast digidub, this is.
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18-08-2005 12:34 |
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anf0 D
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right... youve got the ideas... they just need to be executed abit better. levels are abit off, and things need to be eq'd well. some nice jump up basslines in there. drums need lots of work. other then that... keep working it. practice makes perfect. 
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19-08-2005 01:03 |
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tryptech
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Like many already said
The intro isn very drumn bass, the kicks are to regular, drumnbass is more swing than regular kicking. So you must use more hihats snares and change and repeat rhythms constantly, The synth is to rythmic. It makes me think of a gsm tune.
Some good thing, your break but its always the same, so change that a little bit. The bass is perfect it fits perfect. After the intro the song can be called a drumnbass song but the intro sucks really.
Your notes also need some more color. some more echo maybe when you use synths. Maybe you can add some voice
or some gaps between the break, It give the whole a more impressive look and sound.
Not bad but a little bit childish cause of the synths
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16-08-2006 19:54 |
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BeatJunkie
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I like the bass in the beginning, maybe a lil bit too bassy (compression?) @ :44
imho. I like the drums, but i can barely hear them....again, the bass sound is nice, but a lil too loud i think. could do with sum drum edits., i like the noises that are used... like the synths n whatnot. very funky tune.
not my style but...overall, its sounding good. some tweaking here and there and itll do even better,
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16-08-2006 20:08 |
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