optikal_assassin 
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yeah man, 256k. man them basslines were pretty damn weird man. i think maybe some change in basslines would sound right. just sounds a little too, shit, i dunno how to word it, but almost too digital on the distortion. but damn, this was pretty slick tho. kinda funny how i just checked that one other dudes track with that destroy you sample. everyone must be on this star wars kick lol. darkside jedi shit fo sure tho. i think maybe a little more snap on them snares would give it a bit more impact for me. i like the snare choice tho, dont get me wrong, just a lil more "flick" to it ya know? just a minor detail yeah. yeah, maybe a lil' more variation would make it more interesting, not saying it was boring. not sur ei was too crazy about them percs also, the ones you start fading in around 44 seconds. minor detail of course again. but overall man, it's pretty good shit. worth a listen for me. 
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davieb1
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intros nice like the sample choice and pad ect . the drums start off sounding nice in the intro with that click and stuff but but when they kick in after that little synth line it realy doesnt work the snare sample doesnt fit if you edited the end off the sample maybe but its too biscuit tin sounding not a fan. the bass line aint rely a bassline tis just like some fat wobbly. thing that dont realt do anything. so my thoughts are nice intro need new snare sample and a bit more variation in the programming. and new bassline. looking forward for your next one, in a bit.dave
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anf0 D
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Originally posted by davieb1
the bass line aint rely a bassline tis just like some fat wobbly. |
yeah theres bass... and its in a line...
i didnt want anything too shmick..
i just wanted something i could build into a dark set.
its a tekky sorta tune, and personally i like the feel of the bassline.
its not too much xcitment, but its nice n grimy.
but anyhoo thanx for ze review... and ill check out ur tunes in the morning. now is sleep 
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17-08-2005 18:04 |
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Greyone
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Atmosphere's right , and dark as usual , vocal is a bit too loud.
nice tikkel hat stuff that builds up , ...
Aw the bass sounds great but there's 'background noise' on it , filter it away.
...Ah he followed my advice , high vintage stuff ... rides. 
Tech Itch like , love the anfo style for shure.
vocals R great !
(where did you get the atmosphere sounds ?)
Tight drums man ! nice track 7/10
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17-08-2005 19:36 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Nice to see you back again. The intro is nice. Man cool bass at the drop. Drums are very tight sounding.
It feels like the snare is a wee bit too sharp but that's me. I like the congos. The samples pretty ill too. man I was hoping for a bass line change up on the second drop but still cool.
Nice
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17-08-2005 20:53 |
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anf0 D
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looks like ppl arnt enjoying the bassline...
well fukn too bad. i like it tekky and minimal.
lol other then thanx for your insight fellas
always welcomed n appriciated
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18-08-2005 08:25 |
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Surya
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Vocal seems a bit loud and isn't cut as good as it could have been
Cool how the bass comes in.
Drop: heavy distorted snare. I always like that. The rest doesn't live up to that though. The impact could be bigger. Make the kick more booming and the bass more ripping (and reEQ it a bit to sound a bit fuller).
The delay on "Rise" should be longer imo.
The vocals feel a bit too much like they're pasted of the track after it was finished. They don't really blend in...
The vocals are from Star Wars Episode III thus they are copyrighted. We'll have to delete thisone for that.
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18-08-2005 14:58 |
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cynik
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mind as well remove them, cause they really do nothing for the song
to be honest, the entire track was boring and uneventful.. IMO you can do much better anfo d
or maybe Im just not feeling this, I cant say its particularly bad, it's got all a track should have
not fond of that bassline too tho.. very basic
drums are not hard enough, the atmos didnt hold my attention but since you wanted it as a first track of a set I spose it could serve the purpose
but it must have that something which grabs attention...
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18-08-2005 23:37 |
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anf0 D
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yeah i agree with the comments on the vocals from surya... but yeah ive already fixed them up... and i did make the dely on the rise longer. and fixed it up so it didnt sound to cut and dirty, flows better now. but yeah u can delete this one because of the vocals if u want. i dont care....
didnt want too much of an xciting track because im using it to introduce this heavy dark set coming up, so i want it to progress darker n heavier as it goes on.
and yeah ill fix the drums n shit, hadnt spent much tweaking this version.
thanx for your insight fellaz
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19-08-2005 00:49 |
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vel
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The mixdown on this track is spot on, love the bass and the beats to, all i think is just add some diffrent breaks in this tune (nice work).
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19-08-2005 02:12 |
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anf0 D
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yeah as i said before... its not meant to be exiciting... its not meant to get you moving... its something im using to introduce a set... i like to start of minimal n bring it in loud n heavy. im gonna be mixing "leon switch & kryptic minds - evolution" in then im goin on from there.
when i listen to the tune on headphones or sterio... the snares do their job... im not fkn around cymbals n hats... they can be dry... ur the first to say something about... n i know how picky u are.
but yes... i think i could probably make a more "xciting" tune.
but was not my plan.
thanx for checkin it mate.
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19-08-2005 04:52 |
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equipped
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Dig the into. Whole lotta darkness. 
That snare is all good, but carrying it through the whole trak is a bit much imo. Yeah the vocals could be delayed more especially at>4:01. Bass is cool, maybe layer it up to give it more beef. The bongo's at >6:12 could use some variation. Nice work Anfo's. Allway's a treat! 
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19-08-2005 05:14 |
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Dj Kemix
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Ah Yes!
Twisted metal beats with some wobbling motorized astro bass wiggling around..
Yes definitely beyond our solar system...Nice Tune...maybe switching up the break wouldn’t hurt, cool drums tho. Dark textures, very creative! awesome job dude!
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21-08-2005 14:01 |
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anf0 D
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22-08-2005 06:16 |
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PassDa J.
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Always like your intro's dude ... Some freaky shit gonig on inthere ... LOVE the Star Wars vocal man YEAH! The dark side rules doesn't it
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I love 1:50 nice drop .. allthough that snare is fucking loud man and annoying .. change it (if you want that is) ... k I don't really feel your drums this time, they don't feel natural to me and sound a bit clappery ...
There's not so much change in your tune to my honest opinion, these star wars vocals deserve a better tune dude, not that you suck but I'm not feeling this one ..
Ok cool voice-samples (overused them a lil') drums aren't good and not allot of variation in the song (I have the feeling the silent parts are the only things that are changing during the song)
This is one of the first songs I don't really like of you ..
No hard feeling but in my opinion ... 5.5/10
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22-08-2005 18:34 |
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anf0 D
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true...
well im gonna make another tune today... lol an put more time into this one... im gonna give the star wars vocals some good shit.
thanx for ur opinion mate.
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