Greyone
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""An almost finished tune, please tell me what you would add/change""
OK:
intro :
trippy shit , i love it , Aw check the high freq. ... nah it's Ok.
yeah , yeah , trippy , nice style.
drums are a bit to static and snare's a bit long (i should make it short ,phat n punchy)
It'l like goaa dnb with all the fx , yiou should crank up the sub ,
...Oh yeah is that a reece ...nah a synth ... where's the bass
fuckin like the vocals !
soundquality is nice , ad some more trippy ellements (there are alot , but just some more)
Really like it , just fix the drums (kick louder , snare like i said , and variatioon) and EQ (fix the high freQQ.) and the bass ( a phat mid or a reece should do fine)
... and an outro (there is one , but it's like unexpected and soon imo)
very nice track , just finish it with the elements i mentionsedn (mentioned)
ps: i'm drunk
keep up the producing Formula
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anf0 D
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nice atmo sounds... in the intro.
percs are nice and trippy... the rolling bassline is nice and trippy.
full tekno psycadellic style
drop is cool shit man, nice one. snare is a nice sound, could probably do with some overall eq work, just lil tweakn here n there for some elements. bass is pretty powerful.
really like the percs, they drive the tune along nicely.
i like your style fo sure.
only thing is the bass sounds abit teknoish, doesnt really sound drum n bassish... but its still nice, i like it, u may have ppl whinge about it.
cool shit
keep churning em out.
__ [R] CentaSpike :: Tracks
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17-08-2005 08:03 |
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only thing is the bass sounds abit teknoish, doesnt really sound drum n bassish... |
I wanted it to sound a bit "monotome" It gives the tune that techno-xtc-fly-away-flow IMO. (Big fan of Stakka&Skynet, C4C, Universal Project, Kemal&Rob Data, Blame, and techno off course ...
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and the bass ( a phat mid or a reece should do fine) |
Oky, i'll put an extra midbass in it and give the synthbass a lil' more sub freq. I hope this won't affect the "techno flow"
to much... Anyway, I'll give it a try.
Mastering will be complete in the final version.
cheerz 4 the comments!!! THX!!!
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17-08-2005 12:06 |
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davieb1
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like the intro could do with a bit off eq work tho me tinks. big fan tho tis nice, but too be honest its all the track has goin for it, theres no variation in the drum realy which makes them quite dull the bassline in boring need a more complicated riff with some changes aswell it just the same all the way through, easily fixed tho new drum programing and new bassline with nice filter on will work a treat. whed u get the percussion sample i want em. lol. god luck .dave
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Surya
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Sounds and melodies remind me of 1993 techno... Not too fond of that anymore...
Drop: Snare is a bit lowfi but quite nice, the kick needs a boost. The high-end of your drums could use soms spicing up with some rides imo.
Not bad, but I don't like the style at all
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Not bad, but I don't like the style at all |
I don't like U t al either, dickhead...
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