wTrouble 
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ez...
I was WORSE! 
Some might argue that I still am.
I liked some elements in this, but it's obviously just some loops getting jammed out as there is no structure.
The big bad bass that first kicks in (0.11) swamps the drums until you bring in the other drums, but even then it's a bit wild and a bit basic.
I do like the bassline that kicks in at 1.30, nice!
I'd say try to lay out some structure first of all, then work on some more variations to both the drums and bassline, add some other elements...
I'll check out some of yer more recent stuff the now...
Peace
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16-08-2005 13:01 |
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Greyone
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introdrums are kinda cool (sounds experimental) , ooh noo don't drop a reece after 5 sec ! Build it up nicely with filtering and other FX.
Bass sounds too digital , or maybe that's just your style ?
There are some cool elements in it but there's totally no structure. And EQ the sounds , they clip on my speakers.
Wow nice Drums on 2:04 , really wicked ! Is that self-made ?
Nice for a beginner , man !
Just a lot of EQ work and Structure !
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16-08-2005 14:11 |
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16-08-2005 20:11 |
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Surya
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The drums could be worse, but they're very thin. No punch at all.
The basslines are far from great!
A nice drumbeat doesn't make the track, this track is only as good as it's basslines...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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18-08-2005 15:04 |
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anf0 D
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yeah this is sweet for a first tune although it doesnt follow a theme or sturcture... just mash up of all these basslines... drums are alright though. shit sounds alright... like the levels arnt completely fucked... unlike my first tune...
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19-08-2005 02:13 |
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GeeZZ
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your right it is crap hahah
but its a learning curve so many nice bass cums in a bout 1.30 culb make that ion2 a serrious tune
oviously the synths that layers over the top of it is out of tune n dount fit
sound s very loopy i mean sound like a u made a few loops and bang together to make a tune nuffin wrong wiv that but try make it sound a bit more organic
its gud to listen bac sum times if you can hear sum progression then its gravy
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09-03-2008 19:00 |
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Pretty good mate, the drums could do with a bit more variation, chop it up a bit,
also get some lead in there make it a bit more interesting bleeps etc.
nice phat bass though i didnt ind it at all
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10-03-2008 01:18 |
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I use to do everything in the old Cu-base, allot of bullshit with the old software. I use to just throw reverb and doublr delay on all my drum's and hope for the best. It really sounded shit man! This is a whole lot better! Couple a dam good sound's in there! Cheers Peahead! 