davieb1 
Producer
Registration Date: 04-08-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Peace Of Mind' and post your comments here!!!
First track ive posted on here some feedback would be much apreciated. Cheers.dave
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12-08-2005 12:46 |
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dark intro.....although theres seems to be a little distortion......cool though...very sinister....
lead is a little loud when it drops, im not sure if it really fits with the intro, the intro is dark and very moody, but the drop is hard, but not really what id call dark......some of the synth stabs are a little retro/preset sounding.....although the arabian singing thing is cool.....
production seems ok.....although theres a little distortion in one or two places, nothing that couldnt be sorted.....cool stuff, although id tuck in that lead sound a little...
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12-08-2005 18:07 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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some clicking in the vocals, just need to some sharp fading with the volume at thoes points and it will smooth it out fast.
nice echo with the children voices.
the chipmunk voice no. nice phaser sound on the hi-hats. the bassline is kinda too simple and not raw enough. deffiantly not warm enough.
trance sound after the first drop. lol, kinda nice.
the drums need to thunder out a bit there.
nice second drop. but yea, you need to get some saturation going on there and liven' that bassline, it's so dead.
another way to help vocals stand out and not over power, is to just boost a small band , some key part of it usually around 3.5k - 5k and than you'll hear that vocal sample better, and it will not tack over the track. it's hard to find the right spot, but it's trial and error, and you'll hear it.
the outtro, was short. cut off the end delay! OH NO. 
so yea, just need a bit of gruff to that bassline, to fit the mood of that darkness.
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13-08-2005 16:38 |
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Paki
Cool Steppa
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Interesting babyvocals in the intro:-)
The first drop reminds on some old electro break ( Prodigy style)
Very good baseline :-)
Maybe some more variations in the chorus/flanger at the hihats update:???
The second drop isn`t much different from the first ( exept the background delayed synth) ....
The drums are exelent....
So I rate this 8.5/10 
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14-08-2005 00:35 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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The into baby is desturbing, like the synth after the drop, and I like the FX layers. I can live with-out the baby, if it was dropped the track would seem alot more serious and dark, little children are EVIL anyways! 
Very TECH, love the woman vocal, that's a good sample. Z
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14-08-2005 04:31 |
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Sensa
Wicked Producer
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intro is badddddboyyyy selecta, fuckin evil i love it, them little kids scare me to fuck man!! wiked 10/10 on intro.....the tune itself i thought could of been a bit harder but this is your style who am i to play with it......overall though still very good....i love the synths u bring in adds to the spooky atmosphere!!
love it man
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14-08-2005 14:05 |
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aiku
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Registration Date: 17-05-2005
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babyvocals are very gooood...
your drumwork reminds me littlebit prodigy style..
overall gooood breakbeat! 8/10
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14-08-2005 19:27 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Originally posted by MUNKI C
dark intro.....although theres seems to be a little distortion......cool though...very sinister....
lead is a little loud when it drops, im not sure if it really fits with the intro, the intro is dark and very moody, but the drop is hard, but not really what id call dark......some of the synth stabs are a little retro/preset sounding.....although the arabian singing thing is cool.....
production seems ok.....although theres a little distortion in one or two places, nothing that couldnt be sorted.....cool stuff, although id tuck in that lead sound a little... |
That kinda sums it up...
I was wondering why everything, except the drums, is panned to the left 
Very annoying 
Some cool ideas, but in the end not that great imo.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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15-08-2005 13:41 |
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muphasta
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very smooth intro. creepy. nice how the kick fill is ballanced high left. but again i dont dig the bass sound. too square for me . pitty it controles the overhand the tranzy synth i dont like neither. i would lower the bass a bit and uplift the female singing. end s a bit messy too.
6/10
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10-09-2005 23:32 |
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TANK~
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Registration Date: 18-03-2007
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aaaahhaha nice speech )))) intro like, but with that intro very bad mixing tune....
need more compression. mixdown bad i think
i vary bad speack english n i cant say all about i think about this tune, sorry
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15-03-2008 15:37 |
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Lima
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Registration Date: 15-03-2008
Posts: 9
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This is pretty cool. The baby vocals are a bit too trebbly I think, but the bass lines are very sick, and the drum work is excellent and catchy. Keep them coming!
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