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PassDa J. 
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10-08-2005 23:12 |
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Darkside
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the bell melody in the intro, i think should be left at the first three notes.
theres a lot of clipping (distortion) and some clicking in your beat, the worst two "c"'s since cancer.
the beat isnt really strong it's kinda sneaky...not that its a problem.
i don't really like the little vocal.
ah...when the beat drops back in there's not very good dynamics, i dont feel like im going anywhere...and for gods sake dont use that crash cymbal like it was a ride sample.
of course, i've heard people try worse things on this site.
well i am proud of you for a couple things anyway 
the atmosphere you've got going isnt too bad, some songs here have zip in that category. and you didnt use an amen! i swear, its like 70% of the songs bein uploaded now use it. there's hundreds of breaks out there and they stick on one....
anyway, this is ok for a third song i guess. you'll get it. any questions about what i've said in here, feel free to ask about it.
5/10.
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11-08-2005 04:04 |
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anf0 D
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intro sounds are nice... the bell synth is nice the way it is.
drums are alright... bassline feels abit too powerfull or too much distortion, and does get the clipin sound. drums are fairly good. just need to get ghost snare down pat... and ur hats n cymbals, hats n cymbals are really important to get good sounding driving drums.
bassline is nice.
i like the vocal... because u can hardly make it out and sounds funkdub
the second is more heavy with the bass...
sounding good, just needs to be filld out with some more elements, maybe extra percs, or extra synth or more change ups or something.
but still sounding good.
7/10
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11-08-2005 04:57 |
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PassDa J.
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Thanks for the reviews, well I must say I like it the way it is, offcourse it could be better, but I don't like to work to long on a song ..
You're right about the clipping shit, didn't notice it when I was makin' it, only noticed when you mensioned .. but I'll leave it that way now .. 
.. But I enjoyed producing it .. thanks for the reviews so far .. keep 'em up 
btw yeah you're right .. TO MUCH AMENS BOUNCIN' AROUND THIS PLACE .. have some variation people !
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11-08-2005 14:23 |
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nice progress dude
but still ...told you this already this mornin you should leave the song as it is
save it in fruity then try an rework it
i only start to like it at 3:12 (nice work there tough
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the rest was just too long an something is annoying bout the way you keep repeating it in the end
rework it man
nice progress
(an i ain't rating cuz "some people would go an say --->you let your friends rate you)
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11-08-2005 14:39 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
worked about 5-6 hours in total |
That's not much, now is it 
Dark intro!
Hmmm, goes on for far too long with only them dark sounds...
Drop: lots of crashes! Some of them clip by the way.
Bassline is allright, but it lacks bass
Imo you overdid the crashes...
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11-08-2005 17:01 |
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PassDa J.
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Now listen man, I don't want to spend days or weeks on one song, I like it this way ... it's not my intension to be the master producer here ... I just wanna share my creations
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11-08-2005 17:28 |
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optikal_assassin
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
Now listen man, I don't want to spend days or weeks on one song, I like it this way ... it's not my intension to be the master producer here ... I just wanna share my creations
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That's the way to do it dude, just bust what ya think sounds good and let others just listen. 5 or 6 hours to do this piece man? shit, 5 or 6 hours im just still gettin my breaks programmed and working on just an intro. It's cool how people can just let something roll like that in less than an 8 hour days worth of work. Just imagine what you could do with a few days or even a few weeks on a track 
. Anyhow, the track seems pretty simple, but what ya expect for a few hours? Sounds like the breaks could use more punch, mostly on the snares, sound slike you got a punchy ass kick but a weak snare. S'all good tho. As some did mention, I was hearin' some clicks in the beginning, kinda like where your patterns were ending. But it wasn't all the time, just in a few spots, like towards the very beginning. Maybe it's just me too. I dunno.Synths are nice, just thinking a change of sound from time to time would have been better. Nice and eerie tho. I can definitely see where the title comes from. Overall it's a good attempt bro and glad to see ya stickin' with it.
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11-08-2005 18:16 |
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S.O.T.A.
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What up homey? The begining is nice and dark. I like the hat pattern. The bass seems a little loud when it comes in. The intro seems a little too long. The bassline is cool, I could have done with a few more variations but thats just me. I like it's feel. Cool stuff.
LATER
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11-08-2005 20:37 |
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PassDa J.
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Yeah I know I could've done some better things inthere, like you said it's a lil' simple .. but that's me, for the moment I like to keep it simple .. I just make a song from time to time, when I feel like makin' one, or being in the mood for it
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Yeah I maid up the title after listening to it completely .. it sounded a bit mysterious, creepy and ghosty to me so that's why I came up with ghost city ..
I'll keep the long-time-taking songs for later when I'm a bit better at producing ..
Laterzzz ...
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12-08-2005 17:24 |
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how did you ever get to Wicked Producer? and that helpfullness?
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12-08-2005 17:26 |
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PassDa J.
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Originally posted by realrocksound
how did you ever get to Wicked Producer? and that helpfullness? |
Shut the fuck up man, your cracking up my ass here .. are you jelaous or something? Sounds like it ..
hahaha .. what a loser ..
Oh by the way .. DON'T ACT LIKE YA SHIT DON'T STINK !!! Biatch .. you're not so genious yourself
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12-08-2005 17:31 |
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Darkside
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whoa, hey...
if he's a loser then just ignore him, passda. not even realizing the haters presence is the most debilitating thing you can do to their own self esteem.
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12-08-2005 17:41 |
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PassDa J.
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I just think it's a funny way of reviewing, he didn't even say what was bad about it, I hate shitty reviews with no info .. comprènde ?
It's not if I don't like a song I'm gonna give him stupid comments ..
Would you like it if someone just sais " wow this song sucks and you're not worthy of producing " about your song ? .. Don't think so ..
Oh by the way, I can't stop myself from getting back on his neck ... 
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12-08-2005 17:46 |
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Sensa
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chill out mother fuckas........... i think it was a general question not sarcasm as in.........how did u get to that level? ...........was it so many posts earned u to go up a rank or was it the amount of top rated tunes you have produced.......
you guys shoot first ask questions later way too often, i saw that in other forum too about surora....
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12-08-2005 18:46 |
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PassDa J.
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I'm sure it's because of the amount of posts I have, surely not the amount of tunes, as I said I only have 3 songs so far ..
Some of you guys take this producing-stuff too serious .. that sucks, we don't even know each other .. well maybe some of us .. but it's rediculous ...
Goddamn some PassDa hater rated me down seriously .. bastards
Well laterz y'all ..
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12-08-2005 19:22 |
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Sensa
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
I'm sure it's because of the amount of posts I have, surely not the amount of tunes, as I said I only have 3 songs so far ..
Some of you guys take this producing-stuff too serious .. that sucks, we don't even know each other .. well maybe some of us .. but it's rediculous ...
Goddamn some PassDa hater rated me down seriously .. bastards
Well laterz y'all .. |
naaa man i dont take this seriously i just didnt want to see everyone fightin over a misunderstanding thats all, rocksound is new to dnb.be hes just wonderin how u get your cool producer/master producer etc etc ratings.....
EASY
good tune btw..
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12-08-2005 20:40 |
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exatcly i was just wondering how, i mean obviously its not the quality or quantity but i was honestly inquiring!
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12-08-2005 22:12 |
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Dj Kemix
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Nice!!! I see that you have an ear for audio combination...
I to use the FL Studio 4..Every song made has some kind of story it tells.. "The Tale Of The Ghost City." Keep experimenting with your creative imagination, let your mind go free, and give the world your sound! Big Ups!! for your third tune, it has nice mathamatix in it...
Imagine what track 33 is going to sound like! Sometimes I will write a song in an hour and then write another one in the next. If it's inside of you let it out! or you will surely go mad, muhhaaahaahaa!
Bless Up~KemiX
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12-08-2005 22:21 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by realrocksound
exatcly i was just wondering how, i mean obviously its not the quality or quantity but i was honestly inquiring! |
The ranks are indeed post based, so the worst producer can have the name of master producer...
As for the helpfuness rating: 6 isn't that great, now is it?
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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13-08-2005 10:39 |
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in this song .. 
