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jeez jimmy...12mb!!
first up.id speed it up a little,
im not sure about the off key part of the melody...it seems a little all ove the place in terms of tuning.i kinda see what your after.....its just the tuning really throws me.....bass is good....
not as good as the other two you uploaded....
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10-08-2005 15:17 |
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Surya 
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Nice drums, not too fond of the stabs and shit though...
Bassline kicking in: not bad.
Guitar: could be worse, but not great imo...
Gets quite repetetive quite fast though, I guess you need more elements...
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11-08-2005 17:05 |
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optikal_assassin
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Man, lol, this site has gotta be the dial-up users worst nitemare. 
Thank god for high speed. Anyhow, before I comment on the track man, I just wanted to let you know your avatar cracks me up everytime i see it man lol. Intro was kinda cool, nice breaks. Nice sub workin' on the drop around the 1:07 mark. I think you could've put a pause in there in came in with a stronger drop tho. Maybe it would've helped ease the repetitiveness of it. Not sure I'm really feelin' that guitar sounding synth tho. Overall tune sounds a bit empty in alot of spots too. I think adding more elements of some sort would work a treat for this. Not sure what it could be tho, maybe just some little weird ass sound stabs and whatnot. Just for 6:33 it seems it could've offered a bit more. Don't get me wrong man, I really liked it, just think a little more time on it would've turned out better results. 
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11-08-2005 18:28 |
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Halph-Price
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dial-up, ha. you can get cheap high-speed now for the same price as dial-up.
anyways, the drums are cools, the the metal drum piano stabs are smooth, go nisly with thoes drums. the bassline is deep enough.
the lead is too repative, sorry man, but that would rock being changed around a note hear and there, with thoes swinging drums what couldn't ya do with them. chop the lead up in time to the drums, or anything would help.
that second drop is pretty grissly. nice
deep enough too, and you got it choppin to the beat every now and again, better variation,y ou should just go over that first drop, you really got your groove after, it's a good song.
get a sample or some vocals for it, and mess around with that lead. what you did int he second drop with the bassline, do that a little bit in the first, just to help er along.
nice bongos, and strings go nicly. well mastered too,
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13-08-2005 18:54 |
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zebediah
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Wow! Really impressive! The drums immedietly caught my attention. I'm really feelin this one. As soon as the bassline dropped I thought 'This kid is getting signed to Soul:R.' The overall quality is real nice! 10/10
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20-08-2005 22:53 |
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Formula
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phat tunue, only thinghy i miss is a pause between the intro and the "harder" stuff, save it for your drop
Ok, now i hear a pause, but IMO you should combine the pause with the elements you have in the earlier "pauses".
Sometimes, I thought it has (really) dropped but you're going along...
That's cool, but not in dis tune, save dem for the proper moment...
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