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DJWitch 
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Registration Date: 24-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'spell your fate' and post your comments here!!!
silly bit of noise mongering.....but ready to dance to....BLESSED BE!! oh and if any one wants to cut this as a vinyl(which is already in progress) feel free to pm me and well talk....(i have better quality cuts of this...)
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BLESSED BE TO ALL CREATORS AND LOVERS AND PURVEYORS OF TRUE DRUM AND BASS, PUT FORTH YOUR PASSION AND REASONING AND RAISE YOUR HANDS TO SPACE, DWELL ON THE BEAUTY OF THE MUSIC AND REVELL IN ITS GRACE, SO MOTE IT BE!!..... 
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07-08-2005 21:58 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Your back!!
on the vinyl shpeel! Some really dark sound's creepin around. This is certianly different! Dig the amen shit that creep's in at>5:37 actually dig the whole trak at>5:37. Some mental shit going on! Check 6:23> there's a glitch, I think 
. Yeah that's some mad ass amen editing dude, nice work. The bongo's at the end where soundin great, heavy duty india feel! Cool track man, very unique shit! 
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07-08-2005 22:35 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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What an experiment!! Nice sounds! Dark and heavy. The snare is IDD to loud.
I guess I wouldn't be dancing on this, but that's my choice.
This buildup promises much. (lower the sub, too loud)
Wow, nice buildup - it has the tension! Those snar ehits in the background should be a bit louder, I think 0- like some industrial factory or something. You have the experiment right!!
Maybe the buildup takes too much time...
wow, pause... I'm waiting... nice sub coming... wow wow wow!! What and EXPERIMENT!!!! THIS ROCKS!
the snare is too quiet - add to it, and it has no body... only high frequencies... add to the 00 Hz's... wow, this is great - not exactly for dancing but for listening!!
The amen at the end you got it excellent!! This works man! Man, if I meet some people for a label, I will offer this tune...
haha, "Now get out" 
great work my man! 8/10
(for the probs with FX, mastering)
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11-08-2005 16:06 |
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dubcupboard
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Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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S'up Man not a bad riddim!
Heres some do n don'ts....
Okay intro fat kick, snare, but the fills could be more prominent - sounds empty could av added a few more percs/hits etc to fill out the bump n tick (kik/snare) the bassy synth's nice but no need to pan it off, If you're gonna do that balance it out with a reverb or something across the other side or it sounds a bit skee-wiff! The breakdown goes on 4 ever dude way 2 long. more than 3 mins till the 1st drop is like half the tune done already - however there's some niceness in some of the synths you use to get there at least!
The drop - Not bad but again your fills in between kik n snare lettin this down, ticky hi-hats just aint enuff! The synth on 4.57 = Niiiiiiiice! good choice of sounds, one of your strong points!
5.20 = Now the tune's gettin bumpy! - 5.45 WOTT? Now you've got a tune on your hands
Like why not scrap that intro and bring it back from here? you could pick up from this point and really turn this into sumthing! You got skills fella its a pity cos the tune come really good 2 late.
For overall concept not a bad effort some one-liners (vocals) wouldnt go amiss imo
Tell you what start this one from like drop 2 and this one wouldnt be so slow out of the starting blocks!
Later 
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14-08-2005 22:46 |
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optikal_assassin
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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sup man, i guess alot of what i was thinking has already been laid out. bit too long a buildup for me man. i mean i understand the track was like 8:26 long, but the whole first 5:37 thing was a little dragged out. just as a matter of personal tastes. the breaks after that were pretty frantic tho took buried under the bass and not punchy enough. they kinda almost sounded like anothe rbackground noise rather than a break for me. my point, bring them forward more. the bass i don't think was too loud, just in comparison to the breaks is all. had you brought up the breaks to the front more it would've prolly been just fine. not too crazy of the left to right slide on the breaks tho. i dunno, wild panning effects has never fancied me much unless done absolutely proper and with the right sounds. not for breaks tho. it's got alot of interesting experimentation in sounds just think you could've trimmed alot of the first 5 minutes out and fixed some minor sound issues.
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