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Sensa 
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Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'The Gun Dub FEAT Vocal Inspiration' and post your comments here!!!
Im from Birmingham, UK and in the previous 2 years guncrime has hit the roof, theres already been multiple shootings, 2 innocent girls of which sadly lost their lives. This is a tribute to all those who have fallen due to thoughtless people..
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Re:Voltage Recordings
www.revoltagerecordings.com
+44 (0) 7904966436
Email: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
MSN: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
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07-08-2005 14:30 |
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Daffy dub
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Respect... Love it when people bare a message...
'bout the production, first of all, this is a nice roller, good ravetrack, guess it would not do bad on the dancefloor, would make me jump... but I found the general feeling a bit too techy if you know what I mean... I guess it's the sounds you use, together with the ravy feeling, but's thats just your style I guess... And that means it's just a difference of opinion...
Personally I would boost the bassdrum a bit... Certainly after the main drop... And maybe make it longer, introducing a new theme after the second drop...
So actually, 
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07-08-2005 15:32 |
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optikal_assassin
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I second that!
That's really cool man you'd dedicate this piece in memory of those fallen. The tunes not bad either. Kinda pretty much agree alot on what daffy dub stated. Pretty bouncy tune, just seemed to be lacking some energy. A nice heavier underlying bassline would've worked for this too. Break work, not much to say on it. Pretty basic but gets the job done. Maybe a little more in ya face on the beats too. Really should've worked it out a little longer too. Just died out with really no warning. Maybe it's just a work in progress? Good message sent out tho. Respects for that. Not too bad overall tho, just seems it coulda been delayed a little longer to put more on it to give something more to talk about.
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07-08-2005 16:15 |
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nuthin but respect
in offense to the other people who reviewed you already i think the tune is just ok
try makin an outro an it's all wrapped up for as far as i'm concerned
nice work
keep it deep
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07-08-2005 20:10 |
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equipped
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This is some really good shit man! Crazy ass chant's, what they sayin? Some mad editing with the second synth! Level's sound great on my end. Yeah likin the message man
!! A work in progress? Outro was abrupt. Maybe bring it all back to the regga piano for the outro. Nice gun sample's at 2:00, could be louder imo. Nice work man.
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07-08-2005 23:38 |
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Diasporah
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Nice tune homie...
I like the message it carries.... The synth work is very brooding 
Seems like its not finished cause of the abrupt ending...Woul like to hear a finished version so I can give a detailed review...From what I hear now..Not half bad..Im diggin it
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08-08-2005 00:03 |
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bad chune dude, hope u keep it up! maybe make it longer love dem vocals.
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08-08-2005 15:46 |
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Sensa
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cheers all! thanks for the great reviews,
i will upload the track as soon as its finished,
thanks 
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Re:Voltage Recordings
www.revoltagerecordings.com
+44 (0) 7904966436
Email: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
MSN: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
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08-08-2005 19:32 |
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Darkside
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feelin ya.
i've lived in some hard places too.
intro is a bit different for dnb.
haha chants are hot, quirky stuff.
you do need to give it some energy. the beat never goes into "straight break" mode and kinda stays a bit choppy, and that's ok, you just need to give the bassline some interaction with the beat. they're just flowing along beside each other like they're not even recognizing the presence of one another. your song needs to flow together not apart.
dont really like the lil vocal hit on the snare. you use it too much. you should use it more sparingly.
and thats about all i can say, because the preview's a bit short.
6/10.
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11-08-2005 04:11 |
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PassDa J.
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Like that introsound, funky reggae-vibe .. is that you who spoke in the vocals? If yes nice job ..
I recognize those vocals u used there .. haha got the same 
wow nice trancy-feeling there, to bad you didn't use that reaggae sound inthere .. although I don't like the melodie it takes, sometimes a bit strange ..
Drums are allright .. cool tune man, I'll give ya 8/10
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11-08-2005 13:58 |
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Muad'Dib
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NICE Reggae begining, I like it a lot.
Maybe it takes too long. Nice rap chat, and the begining of the drums - damn, this rocks!
What a story! One of the rare tunes with story.
Damn, those tribe chanting... that rises the atmosphere man!!! Wow, this works... and the build up rocks.... w8....
ahh, the break disapointed me - I expected a little faster break... 
but this suits it. nice work.
The reeces are kool - they add a spice to the sound... you have great atmo.
Is that my ears, or there is some 'huh' voice chat when the snare hits?! 
Nice snare, and u have kool hat lines, but bad fx - they can't be heard good enuf.
Anyway, this becomes boring. And it ends. Too abruptly.
Experiment and variations is the key - use them big.
5/10
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