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Please check out my new track 'Klass - Cast You Out' and post your comments here!!!
This is an MP3 of a song I did thats needs some work but its almost done. All samples are taken off of licensed cd's. Any comments or ideas are appreciated. Thanks Again Klass!!!
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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04-08-2005 17:47 |
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optikal_assassin 
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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whats up bro.
intro comes in pretty descent. like the sounds you used to build the intro. i was kinda disappointed tho when the drop came in @ 1:27. The synth just did it no justice and it seemed to be seriously lacking a good bassline. the breaks were good, nice and snappy, just think you should've cut them more than you did. Just sounds like the same break looping over and over. your second drop at 3:39 was not inspiring either man. This tracks needs some serious work along with a bassline. Sounds like there is one but almost unnoticeable. The synths on the last part of the track are kinda dull too man, needs a whole different tune to it. Not a bad effort, but I think alot of things coulda been different. 
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04-08-2005 18:56 |
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its something i did a while ago, its just a work in progress i guess, thanks dude!
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04-08-2005 19:12 |
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Surya
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The piano sounds pretty lowfi and is offbeat...
Drums don't sound too crisp either...
Bassline is quite good, soundwise, but a tad more mid would be nice.
Becomes quite boring fast since there's little more than drums + bassline.
Second drop: the new theme doesn't work at all, ditch it...
Dunno. Sound isn't great and the track is boring. On to the next one I'd say...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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05-08-2005 15:35 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Registration Date: 21-06-2005
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Gotta be against illegal sampling. So that Mike Oldfield sample from Tubular Bells at intro did turn me down.
nice sound at beats.
All movie samples were ok (repeat for what I just said), but when the beat / bass starts around 4 minutes, you lazy tweep have been copypasting the same bassline/beats all over again for 3 minutes! no good.
DnB is very difficult genre to be in with. It works with such a minimal amount of components: Drums, bass, 2 additional instruments, some effects. In such context, you wont get away with copypasting stuff.
Listen analytically to stuff done by greats at here, they really really work with their beats - they got huge amounts of variation at loops plus several drum kits in one song. Bassline is not repeating but is really complex and full of variation.
Get back to this song at once! work harder! usage of CTRL+C is forbidden! 
3/10
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20-08-2005 20:41 |
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