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PEAHEAD
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oh my god what is this. pure loops and breaks. for a start itz miles to slow. 
the bass needs boosting and oh my god i cant even think of nething to say. no offecnce but this is terible. there is no structure to it at all no thaught gone into it jus loads of loops put together 
i think tht this song is not goin nowhere EVA! im not tryna be a cunt but im jus sayin what i think...
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02-08-2005 16:47 |
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baz 
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Originally posted by PEAHEAD
oh my god what is this. pure loops and breaks. for a start itz miles to slow.
the bass needs boosting and oh my god i cant even think of nething to say. no offecnce but this is terible. there is no structure to it at all no thaught gone into it jus loads of loops put together
i think tht this song is not goin nowhere EVA! im not tryna be a cunt but im jus sayin what i think... |
someone doesn't now what a loop is
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02-08-2005 17:08 |
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ethex
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Originally posted by PEAHEAD
oh my god what is this. pure loops and breaks. for a start itz miles to slow.
the bass needs boosting and oh my god i cant even think of nething to say. no offecnce but this is terible. there is no structure to it at all no thaught gone into it jus loads of loops put together
i think tht this song is not goin nowhere EVA! im not tryna be a cunt but im jus sayin what i think... |
dude havent seen your tracks here.. so give him a break okei..
ANYWAYS track is a bit try!
needs sub!
maybe some sick vocals?
and speed it up abit... 175bpm or so...
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02-08-2005 20:46 |
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equipped
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Nice bass man, nice work cuttin the amen's, level's sound excellent imo. I agree that the bpm could be brought up a bit. Sound's really good when the bass come's in at 00:27. Man those are some funky amen's> 00:37 to precise. You should save some of the amen's you've created and speed em up for a future track, really unique! Nice Work, keep cuttin up those amen's your gettin good! 
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02-08-2005 22:15 |
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baz
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thx for reviewing peeps
apreciate it
yeah maybe the tempo should be turned up a bit
(but i'm way into hiphop an i geuss it kinda reflected emself in the tempo)
thx
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03-08-2005 11:33 |
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Darkside
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give that amen a small, almost subliminal bit of light reverb and freshen it up. fade the edges to take off that clicking.
this is really weird, is it supposed to be dnb or...?
i'm a hiphop producer, mayb i should ask to see if i could post some of my beats on here sumtime...you dig?
i like the chopping you did but since there's big gaps it doesnt flow...sometimes that can be cool, but not when you do it for the whole track...
this is really jus...i don't like this haha sorry but its just really not doing anything for me. it's just beats and a bass, basically. i can tell you must have sliced the hell out of these breaks tho, and thats pretty much the only positive thing i can say, is that the slicing is good. and the levels are fine. otherwise...seeing stuff like this on dnb.be with a 10/10 makes me want to just quit this shit. this site used to be tight. you seem like a good enough guy tho, its jus what crazy ass rated u that high? ah well, what can a guy do. nobody important will look at the ratings anyway.
5/10
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Darkside: 04-08-2005 02:35.
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04-08-2005 02:34 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Darkside
you seem like a good enough guy tho, its jus what crazy ass rated u that high? ah well, what can a guy do. nobody important will look at the ratings anyway.
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i really wouldn't know who rated me an i don't even give a shit
(been bothering bout that long enough for now)
fuck the ratings long live music
as long as i'm having a good time i'm representing
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04-08-2005 03:16 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Darkside
i'm a hiphop producer, mayb i should ask to see if i could post some of my beats on here sumtime...you dig?
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hell yeah i dig
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04-08-2005 03:18 |
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teknyne
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ez m8, thanks for checkin my stuff
feelin this track
i reckon it needs a bit of filling out tho another synth part maybe. ur amens got my head noddin good n proper, really original style. as the others say i reckon the tempo should be upped a bit. arrangement is spot on. look forward to hearing more from you soon
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04-08-2005 17:55 |
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optikal_assassin
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yeah, this track is pretty damn dry man. I think alot of people misunderstood what this was supposed to be as the title of the track implies. (old skool bb) which is breakbeats right? if i understood you correctly. but just not really a whole hell of alot going down in this track. just seems more like a display of cutting. it just sounds too dry tho, maybe some atmospher eor even some subtle verb on them breaks would work a treat. Respects for the cuts tho, but not really much else i can speak for. Thanks for sharin'
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04-08-2005 18:49 |
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baz
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Originally posted by optikassassin
yeah, this track is pretty damn dry man. I think alot of people misunderstood what this was supposed to be as the title of the track implies. (old skool bb) which is breakbeats right?
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you are correct
i acctually started workin on it again yesterday
turned the pitch up a notch (170 bpm)
added a freealpha synth an a sub
also i've been thinking bout mc-in in this one
anyhow...thx for the reviews peeps
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05-08-2005 11:45 |
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davieb1
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how do mate jsut bin listening to ur tune tis way too slow the breaks dont work properly because of this ,by the sounds of it youve just bin chopin up a loop for the break , maybe you should practice your programing or do some tutorials (some on computermusic.co.uk) the hook in the tune is virtualy non-existant so ou kind of loose interest after the first 30secs, needs a propa intro n all with a nice drop me tinks. safe geeza,
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05-08-2005 12:24 |
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baz
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Originally posted by davieb1
maybe you should practice your programing or do some tutorials (some on computermusic.co.uk) |
thx but i'm passin on this one
no tutorials for me man
got this far already comin' from scrap
all i need is more practice
thx for review tho
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05-08-2005 12:30 |
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DJ-ABOMINABLE
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I liked it I would make that ooah noise or beat change tones through out the track also the space beats at the end I found a little anoying the scaled beat needs fixed as well I would go back and edit those I did like the begining though. But the spaced beats at the end gotta go. The fade out ending also matched nicely. I'd give it a 6.
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06-08-2005 05:03 |
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Surya
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Oh man, this track is slooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww
Typical old skool amen beats, which sound a tad too lowfi
The basslines are kinda cool but sound a tiny bit offbeat 
Not really a track I would listen to again just for the fun of it...
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06-08-2005 18:00 |
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Muad'Dib
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nice begining. Yes, as Surya said, this track is slooooooooow, but has nice break.
Nice basses, but that second one is too loud. Wow, kool breaks... this attack of the breaks rules...
you have no hihats 
or can't be heard.. try fixing that. The tune begins to get boring at the middle. And please lower that second (distorted) bass, its way to loud.
The hats came in. Nice combination of the snares and the kicks, and those hihats are very loud. Try killing their sound a bit.
You have very abrupt changes, which are ok, but become very boring because you use them all over..
And you have no buildup (except the middle one, which is something not exactly a buildup), which would be fine.
The end is getting very boring, and the fade out SUX!! That is, like halph-price said, a weak excuse of the producers when they don't have any more ideas for end.
4/10
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11-08-2005 15:37 |
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Halph-Price
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i hoped you learned a valuable lessons from this.
amen is to be played at 180 bpm.
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13-08-2005 19:09 |
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baz
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
i hoped you learned a valuable lessons from this.
amen is to be played at 180 bpm. |
yeah i did
(but i actually think 170 is quite allright too ey)
thx
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14-08-2005 00:35 |
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