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Rude 
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Please check out my new track 'JUMP (unfinished... kinda stuck)' and post your comments here!!!
Now what???
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01-08-2005 12:53 |
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Surya
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Nice snare 
Scratching is a bit too straight...
Reece: not bad, but give the mid a boost.
Drums are too straight too, and are a bit overpowered by the rest.
Some scratching + drums + bassline + some FX isn't enuf to build a track, that's why you're stuck...
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01-08-2005 15:44 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by Surya
Some scratching + drums + bassline + some FX isn't enuf to build a track, that's why you're stuck... |
You know Y i'm stuck? because people don't say what I could ADD
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01-08-2005 15:53 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Surya
Some scratching + drums + bassline + some FX isn't enuf to build a track, that's why you're stuck... |
You know Y i'm stuck? because people don't say what I could ADD |
Lol, just add anything you encounter, and remove the things you didn't use in the end 
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01-08-2005 16:05 |
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Rude
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what's that? 2 STARS?! without another review? GOD DAMN YOU, DNB
all you downraters
guess I'll be leaving too then
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01-08-2005 18:56 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Rude
all you downraters
guess I'll be leaving too then |
Why is it so hard to simply ignore the score?
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01-08-2005 19:07 |
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Rude
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I dunno... if I don't have any stars, I don't get any reviews. If I don't get any reviews, I'll never know how to make better tunes....
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01-08-2005 19:08 |
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Surya
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I'll never know how to make better tunes.... |
Bullshit imo. I didn't get better by reading reviews to my tunes, coz all I ever got was 'great man' and 'your best tune yet'. Never understood why...
I got better by listening better to the music I wanted to make, by studying it trough and trough. I only got to the point where I made the music I really wanted to make about 9 months ago. Before that I was still searching and experimenting...
Reviews can help, but don't rely on them them make you good!
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01-08-2005 19:17 |
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equipped
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Nice scratching, maybe throw the mad scratching into a sampler and apply some filteres, tight loop's ect. Drum's are really clean! Nice sound's but more would be good. Maybe add some vocal's. Bass was good but maybe add another bass and use it to accent the beat more. nice work dude, hope the ideas were helpfull
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01-08-2005 23:07 |
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optikal_assassin
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I agree alot on what Surya said, I wouldn't rely on reviews completely. There's always gonna be people out there who down your shit, either cuz 1. they really don't like it 2. they haven't a clue what good music is 3. they just don't really care. It's a fact of life man, there's always gonna be people out there who just ain't feelin' your tune. Even the most popular artists get bad reviews on certain shit that didn't strike people right. I think you should just not worry 'bout stars and the best reviews you can, and just do what makes you happy. Seems anymore alot of people are just about getting reviews and high star ratings and completely overlooking what the whole point of this is. To make shit you want to hear and have fun doing it. IMO that's why alot of people get stuck or feel like giving up cuz they'r emore concerned about making a style that everyone else wants to hear and when they fail in that department, like if it doesn't click with the crowd, then they just want to give up. For me stars don't really mean much. If people don't like my shit, then oh well, i had fun doing it at least and i learned alot of things if anything, and just pick up and go onto something else. So keep ya head up man, and don't let shit get ya down soo bad. 
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02-08-2005 00:27 |
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2. they haven't a clue what good music is |
who defines "good" music?????
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02-08-2005 10:09 |
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optikal_assassin
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I guess what I also meant to say is I guess i should learn not to stick my nose in business it doesn't belong, i just end up making myself look a damn fool. i was just trying to help encourage Rude.... 
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02-08-2005 11:01 |
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DJ-ABOMINABLE
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I would take out the first drumbeats you hear and only leave 1 set rather than 2 sets for the very beginning. When the scratch starts that was good however I might put a spin on the second scratches third fourth and so on say add a different tone or pitch all in all it was good just take out the first set of drums and leave the second right before the drop. Also don't let constructive criticism run you outta here. Good Luck. Rate it a 7.
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