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Soi 
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i*ntro contains two bass/synths, the second is way too loud in comparison to the first one. intro-wise you could just be off very well with some pads underneath.
*drop + rest of beat: Kicks + snare are nice (they have impact), but the notes in between are a bit 'muddy' or oddly quantised.
*bass could use some variation or filtering, try playing with the freq+cut-off a bit, it should add some more human feeling.
*hihats at 3:50 are also very loud and harsh
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01-08-2005 12:54 |
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yeah it deff needs work , i know
i'll try the messin with frequency a bit an see what it gives
thx
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01-08-2005 13:14 |
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Surya
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I got rather annoyed by the sound and melody of the bassline
The drums don't sound bad, but they roll as good as a brick...
Weird volume changes in the snares make me suspicous about bad compression
Being little more than that annoying bass + beats, this track is rather boring too...
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01-08-2005 15:48 |
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Good effect's on the drum's at>1:48. Nice work layering the drum's at>2:33 that's some fancy shit! A phat sub would certianly fit with your track. Overall level's were not too bad imo. Didn't really dig the sound of the synth but loved how you edited! Nice work baz! 
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02-08-2005 05:19 |
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baz
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thx for the reviews so far 
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02-08-2005 10:01 |
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cynik
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8.00 out of three votes, so I had to check this out
man, this siter really beginning to stink cause of that and unnerves me that you probably invited your buds to rate your tracks, how lame!
but heres a review nonetheless:
not much here to hold interest, you say anthem? an anthem should include a catchy tune so people remember it, I forgot the melody of the bassline as soon as it ended
work on those sounds and levels. bass sounds too patchy, default, try distorting it if you havent, if you did maybe add some more
but thats really minor due to the fact the melody is really irritating after like, two bars
drums on the other hand sound well and have nice variations to them. the sequencing is maybe too start/stop so much of the "flow" is lost
again, the sound.. too much disproportions, man, work a bit more on blending them together, so they sound compact. never settle on what sounds "ok" you got to make it sounds fucking perfect to your ear...
there should be a propper drop/breakdown sequence according to the style? this kinda rolls on through with not much impact
overall very few things I like here, sorry. but don;t worry, review has nothing to do with the dirty rating tricks
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03-08-2005 18:46 |
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03-08-2005 19:39 |
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Originally posted by cynik
8.00 out of three votes, so I had to check this out
man, this siter really beginning to stink cause of that and unnerves me that you probably invited your buds to rate your tracks, how lame!
but heres a review nonetheless:
not much here to hold interest, you say anthem? an anthem should include a catchy tune so people remember it, I forgot the melody of the bassline as soon as it ended
work on those sounds and levels. bass sounds too patchy, default, try distorting it if you havent, if you did maybe add some more
but thats really minor due to the fact the melody is really irritating after like, two bars
drums on the other hand sound well and have nice variations to them. the sequencing is maybe too start/stop so much of the "flow" is lost
again, the sound.. too much disproportions, man, work a bit more on blending them together, so they sound compact. never settle on what sounds "ok" you got to make it sounds fucking perfect to your ear...
there should be a propper drop/breakdown sequence according to the style? this kinda rolls on through with not much impact
overall very few things I like here, sorry. but don;t worry, review has nothing to do with the dirty rating tricks |
thx for the review anyway but stop the bullshit please
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03-08-2005 19:40 |
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cynik
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you moron, read properly, I said YOU PROBABLY..
hahahhah why then the agressive stuff if it's not true? fuck you too..
ok fair enough I apologize if I were wrong..
I never rated your track or you. yeah I know the ratings suck but this is ridiculous. I wonder, when I put my last track on the site I got a 1 star instantly.. veryone who reviewed didnt dislike the track, so the fucker didnt show up to say why..
same is with people like Rude, Halph-Price, Surora23 etc. the minute they put a track up it becomes underated..
I wonder if theyre the same people that blindly give nubes 9 and 10..
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04-08-2005 10:01 |
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baz
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Originally posted by cynik
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I wonder, when I put my last track on the site I got a 1 star instantly.. veryone who reviewed didnt dislike the track, so the fucker didnt show up to say why..
same is with people like Rude, Halph-Price, Surora23 etc. the minute they put a track up it becomes underated..
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i think it sucks for all you good producers out there, but can't anyone see who rated who?
alot of bullcrap would've been unnessecary then
(ps i was chill just those emoticons looked aggresive an i'm not into bullshit)
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04-08-2005 11:44 |
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Thats wat im tallking about,good shit bruv keep it
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29-08-2005 16:45 |
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Nick ZZ
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The synth is alright, got me for a sec. when you pitched it in the intro. I liked when you sped it up for the build. The pattern is an anthem sort. If you layer some more sounds on the intro it would fill in some spaces and add a little dimension. LIke the drums, hard hitting. Also if you layer the synth with a low and or a high with the same pattern diff synth it will improve. 7/10* Z
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30-08-2005 09:16 |
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PassDa J.
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Damn Cynik you just won't give up with the rating shit huh ??? Asshole
If you keep wining like a lil' babybitch I'll rate you down for sure !
BTW, do you think you're that good boy .. looks like you think you're a pretty hotshot heh ... well ... you're not ... ass ... hole ...
Bitch 
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30-08-2005 17:02 |
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Originally posted by Nick ZZ
The synth is alright, got me for a sec. when you pitched it in the intro. I liked when you sped it up for the build. The pattern is an anthem sort. If you layer some more sounds on the intro it would fill in some spaces and add a little dimension. LIke the drums, hard hitting. Also if you layer the synth with a low and or a high with the same pattern diff synth it will improve. 7/10* Z |
thx man works still in progress 
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30-08-2005 17:15 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
Damn Cynik you just won't give up with the rating shit huh ??? Asshole
If you keep wining like a lil' babybitch I'll rate you down for sure !
BTW, do you think you're that good boy .. looks like you think you're a pretty hotshot heh ... well ... you're not ... ass ... hole ...
Bitch
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30-08-2005 18:02 |
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so, this tune seems like it needs variation. the record drag sample is way too jagged, the drums are on the top of the track, they sound like a machine. try to layer bass together, you can drop the distortion out and play the deep sub along with some hand drums or something. the idea is there, the melody is simple, slow it down, reverse it, time stretch it, filter it, do a echo, just do something else with it from time to time if your going to play the same notes over and over through out the tune. the tune sounds like a novice clipse. can't say anything that nice about it, just that it is a tune. don't think that you should be discouraged, twist this tune up a bit and you will get what you want from it.
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31-08-2005 00:09 |
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Originally posted by Soi
i*ntro contains two bass/synths, the second is way too loud in comparison to the first one. intro-wise you could just be off very well with some pads underneath.
*drop + rest of beat: Kicks + snare are nice (they have impact), but the notes in between are a bit 'muddy' or oddly quantised.
*bass could use some variation or filtering, try playing with the freq+cut-off a bit, it should add some more human feeling.
*hihats at 3:50 are also very loud and harsh |
Yeah, Soi made some points I wanted to go back on also. Intro was kinda ehhhh, so so. I wasn't too crazy how you just cracked that shit open with the bassline like that. the second bassline synth as he stated way too loud in comparison to the first one. Sounded to me like it had a hell of alot of resonance on it too which kinda made for sore ears at high volumes. I used to make the same mistake man long time ago when i used to do filtering on basslines and shit, too much resonance and it'd make the shit scream in comparison to the rest of the mix. Not a good thing, gotta find that right balance to make it all sit in right. The rest of the track was a little over repetitive, too empty in some spots. Sounds almost like in some spots you just ran out of ideas so you threw in a couple kicks and random shots to make up for it. I'd say for your lead bassline man, maybe trying some higher frequency reverb would breath an ass load of life into it. I like to do that anyways, different strokes for different folks tho. Just don't let the low end freq's pass through the reverb too much or its gonna muddy that shit up. Sorry I know this track is a bit older but i noticed it keeps popping up around the top of the forums so i thought to lay my 2 cents in on it. Just work on your variations, leveling, and just making it sound right and you'll be aight. Take it easy...
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31-08-2005 06:31 |
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Originally posted by optikassassin
Sorry I know this track is a bit older but i noticed it keeps popping up around the top of the forums so i thought to lay my 2 cents in on it |
cool ain't it????
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