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beatRon 
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Please check out my new track 'absynth' and post your comments here!!!
this one's for all you partypeople out there.. it's programmed in reason 2.5, just testing some new stuff, i like 2 know your opinion.. thx.
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31-07-2005 23:37 |
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baz
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80kbps?? dude wtf is goin on ??
the synth in the back is pretty much lame as it gets
1:22 sorry don't like the drop
(i am feelin your drumz though but try makin the snares more agressive :bigup
perhaps i would've liked it better if you'd 've put some better soundquality to it
but the bassline at 03:27 really drops in way offbeat an doesn't make any sense ,sorry 
keep at it( an try makin it at least 128 kbp/s 
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01-08-2005 01:08 |
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optikal_assassin
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Ehhh, it's not bad man. First off the quality on the MP3 just sucks, seems to have taken away from the whole mix. I would've liked to have had some mor ehigh end on this preview as I think a good crisp high end can add more feel to a track. Intro synths, not bad, doesn't seem to fit the nature of the track for me tho. Buildup before the drop wasn't bad either, just think it should've been a little something more than just kicks tho, maybe some hihats to add more feel to it. Drop really didn't impact me enough tho and after the drop, things just started gettin' kinda too weird for me. That synth you started bring in around 2:18 that went the rest of the track just started nerving me. Totally didn't seem to fit. Too much silence at the end of the track too man. Track is 5:29 and cuts off at 4:48 
. It's interesting soo to say but I can't give to much advice for 2 reasons, 1. quality is seriously lacking, like a lo-fi previe wor somethin' 2. it seems really scattered and doesn't have much that sticks in my head. Nice attempt tho. 
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01-08-2005 05:19 |
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beatRon
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01-08-2005 12:51 |
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Surya
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Nice strings in the intro, nice melody.
Drop: not impressed by the drums
Switch to amen doesn't work. Too abrupt and the amen sounds shit.
The sound kinda sucks, but I guess thats the 80kbps doing its work.
The bassline coming in @ 3.26 sounds like farts. Ew...
Drums kinda drown in the mix
Dunno, I'm afraid I can't say too much positive about thisone...
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01-08-2005 15:57 |
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equipped
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02-08-2005 01:46 |
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02-08-2005 02:43 |
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Surya
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The bassline coming in @ 3.26 sounds like farts. Ew... |
Ha ha, Surya thought the farting synth was raunchy. 
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No, but I did think it sounded rather awfull
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02-08-2005 11:03 |
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DJ-ABOMINABLE
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Damn ain't there some hatin motherfuckers up in here. First the bass was tha bomb was waitin on the cops to show because of my altec subs. The middle however sounds a little to repetitive and as for the farting synth you might want to clean that up and no let it run for so long. Otther than that I liked it and I would rate it a 6.5
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06-08-2005 05:22 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by DJ-ABOMINABLE
Damn ain't there some hatin motherfuckers up in here. |
If you're referring to me: people know me as someone who speaks his mind. Not to hurt people but to let them know something is wrong...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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06-08-2005 11:46 |
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beatRon
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i think surya is right... his comments are really helpful.. peace
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07-08-2005 16:59 |
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Rude
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... play ... ok.. this is one quiet intro. Nice strings/pads/whatevers!
Nice...
so far so good... well now. Jungle stuff is nice... drop wasn't really effective..
man... I gotta say, I kinda like it! Experimental percussion !!! SWEET !!!
I always do that lol.. random perc.
then the metal-like synth comes in... nah I don't like it.... It's like a bassstab with too much room size/time & waaaaay too much color (reverb)
That's no fart, surya!
Search google for fart samples 
lmfao
Nywayz... I tought you were a female producer?
Whoopz what happened to the outtro? Well...
Here's my oppinion:
-boost the bass a bit
-use distorted rides in the background to get this massive sound for the drums
-use a synthline or something... fantasy stuff u know (listen to Djsensa - Goosebumps)
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KEEP EXPERIMENTING DUDE you're doin' good
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07-08-2005 17:12 |
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More of the amen's would be good! Bass is nice and heavy, good vocal's, nice work with all tha little drum sound's at>1:55. Like the filtering job at 2:48. Cool tune man, just need to sort that sound quality issue.
