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Halph-Price 
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Recording Industry Orientation (RIO) Program ' and post your comments here!!!
I need comments on how to improve this song to be made for a music video. help.
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31-07-2005 19:47 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Bongo's are fantstic dude! That old school hip-hop soundin synth is a tad to loud in the mix imo. So this is for a music video, what's the theme of the video? Beside's music. I have no clue what to say in reagard's to the video, never done anything like that. It's hard to congure up ideas without seeing the vid. Nice work though, some really cool soundin synth's. Curios as to where your takin the R.I.O. program? Would love to get into a program like that. 
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31-07-2005 21:07 |
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beatRon
Producer
Registration Date: 10-03-2005
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on 33" i like your fill inn with the drums. also nice fx. 1'52"nice melody. bass is also ok.. if you could only spice up your drum sound a little bit... cause i think its a little flat. however, nice work, succes with the video..
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31-07-2005 23:58 |
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S.O.T.A.
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What's happenin? Intro is cool iggin the bongos. The synth noise is way too loud, but it's cool. Then the rollin bass is nice. It's a nice build up to the drop. The drop is neat. OHH that's some crazy shit. I like it! It feels like it needs some single hit vocals or something but that's just me. Cool to listen to thanks.
LATER 
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01-08-2005 06:41 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Cool drums
Bassline could use some distorting + HP imo
Oh man, that's some fucked up sound. Hurting my ears badly. And overpowering everything else, so turn it down!
The screams are kinda cool too...
1.52: next highly annoying melody
Hmmm, this is kinda how we know you: weird and strange, but ultimatly not very good I'm afraid...
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01-08-2005 16:03 |
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davieb1
Producer
Registration Date: 04-08-2005
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can see what ur tryin but dont think i works, drums have got no swing bit dull like, melodies are quite weak, mix is poor, but quite experimental in a way.sound
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04-08-2005 18:08 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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swing on drums has to be the hardest thing to do. the bassline i though was nice, and yes, the one squeal is bad in there.
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05-08-2005 03:02 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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not too fond of your sound choice with the kik and its hardly heard when bassline starts (they share a similar frequency peak?)
eugh, what the fuck is wrong with you man?!??! 00:38 toss that ear-fucking sound please!!! there was a cool little break prior to that..
now everytyhings so-so ok.. xcept for the synth. oh no here it is again! explain why you want to torture us??
and the second synths real cheese, too patchy and basic
overall you didnt move a millimeter me with this try... IMO put it in the video only AFTER you ditch the fuckups..
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05-08-2005 17:50 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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The kick sux. The snare too.
The sub is WAY to loud. Man, cut from the 500Hz. Nice break, and that FM synthetizer sound which kills my ears... people get shot on the street for things like that.
Nice kool pause... and the sub comes too loud again. The break after the pause is good enuf - the synth sound is ok, but without pro sounding, if you know what I mean - try adding chorus or reverb to it.
Let me repeat, the snare and the kick SUCK. Fix them immediately.
4/10
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11-08-2005 16:10 |
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evzone
Tourist
Registration Date: 20-06-2005
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ok, it sounds like your using a roland old skool drum machine that is all 808s, and the "synth" line sounds like its not only too high but is out of key, this track reminds me of like an 80's retro song, I havent heard any of your other trax so i dont know if this is your "style", but i cant say im very fond of this trak. not tryin to be harsh, but 
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13-08-2005 00:04 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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Allright you sound raper , thos' basskick are nice hardcore pieces , snare could use high end.
Some sounds are very ... euh un-classifiable , i can't find the right words for them. like at 40 sec , that high synth ... shit , my ears .
1:53 is nice but those strange melody-lines make me feel weird.
Percussion stuff is something nice 'n clear.
I should say filter , distort , do you thing with the high sounds and it's fine.
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14-08-2005 15:37 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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thanks greyingone. i like how out of all the songs on the board mine are the only ones with tumbs down. this song, unlike most, deserved it. hardcore.
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15-08-2005 15:50 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
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... it's just a special track from a special boy and he goes to a special school and has special results ... mostly thumbs down 
Just kiddin' hellf prise , keep making them.
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15-08-2005 17:04 |
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