DJ Hybrid K 
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Please check out my new track 'science' and post your comments here!!!
this is just what i've done so far i still need to bring the drums up a little bit and add...the rest of the song.
just want to know what you think and if you have any sugestions?
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30-07-2005 02:09 |
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DJ Hybrid K
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by the way. made with cubase.
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30-07-2005 02:11 |
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cynik
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yeh, boost the drums, I could barely hear the snare and where is the kick after the drop?
the drop itself, felt like something mean is about to happen. Imo keep those kicks from the bdbdbdbdbdbd drop sequence, but be careful, there is some unwanted distortion there or maybe clipping?
intro is pretty cool tho, atmospheric, industrial and such..
but ugh when that bassline enters.. needs to be changed.. I lost interest in it pretty fast even after the shifts.
but, I can hear where youre going with this, not my style of choonage though..
the drop was cool
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30-07-2005 03:35 |
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optikal_assassin
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I think it needs a serious rework and suggestions are really hard to place man. It didn't sound like much but rumbling noise. Can't give suggestions as to what could be better or different as i couldn't really make out much. first things first, first get your breaks brought up more, lose some of that noise and tame the bass. Sorry I couldn't be more helpful, but you didn't give me much to go with. 
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30-07-2005 06:21 |
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DJ Hybrid K
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oh by the way people. i have no idea how this sounds on reguler speakers.
i moniter my mix through a PA system. 
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30-07-2005 06:33 |
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Surora23
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k ill give youa thorough review...
intro is cool as fuck...(its our lil secret weapon lol) we love that vsti too 
too bad no one knows what it is lol HAHAHA...
anyway...bass comes in...sounds a lil glitchy...too digital...
youre usig diff samples tahn in that lil drum roll into it...cause the drumsd completly fade...although you already sated you need to raise the drums...thats an understatement...all i hear is hats....i hardly even hear the snare, much less anything else...
the bass is wayyyyyyyyyyy tooo lofi...not sure what youre using, but use a diff sound, or tweak the fuck out of it...
yea dude...ill give you more details when we talk mono eh mono k?
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30-07-2005 06:46 |
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er dude get some decent studio monitors....pa speakers arent really designed for mixing.....more for loud projection of sound.....not accuracy
this is ok..the mix is really muddy though.
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30-07-2005 18:00 |
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Soi
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*Intro is nice, could use abit more 'story tho'
*Breakdown+drop are very suddenly there.
*Real drop is not powerful enough, even more quiet than the pre-drop (very small remark, you can ignore this), cranck dem drums open!! they seem to be nice for what i can hear of it.
*Bassline: lots oh higs, maybe layer it into more sub/deepness and manipulated highs?
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01-08-2005 12:17 |
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baz
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Originally posted by cynik
kicks from the bdbdbdbdbdbd drop sequence, but be careful, there is some unwanted distortion there or maybe clipping?
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some?...at the start my headphone was crackin' emself a way to heaven.
really can't make verry much up out of it but i can hear your cathy bassline/synth
that part i like, but it really needs boost , equalising an certainley needs filtering
(low pass)
try working on this one cuz i think i would like it but i could only hear cymbals an hihats so ...
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01-08-2005 12:36 |
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Originally posted by DJ Hybrid K
oh by the way people. i have no idea how this sounds on reguler speakers.
i moniter my mix through a PA system.
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that explains
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01-08-2005 12:40 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by baz
[quote]Originally posted by cynik
kicks from the bdbdbdbdbdbd drop sequence, but be careful, there is some unwanted distortion there or maybe clipping?
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some?...at the start my headphone was crackin' emself a way to heaven.
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well, it seems I had a DFX plugin while listening to it which did a little makeup.
yeh, it's clipping as hell without it... I suggest getting a frequency analyzer if you can't hear it on your speakers
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01-08-2005 12:43 |
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Surya
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Intro is ok, but not great
The sound of the bassline is too digital, you used the wrong form of distortion
I guess the drums are quite nice, but I can't be sure since they're completely overpowered by the bassline, which is way too loud!
Not really feelin the melody of the bassline, it's rather annying acually...
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02-08-2005 11:24 |
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PEAHEAD
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the into is very good. i think the bass needs to be made more crisp to much fuzz. wel thts wat i fink neways. the drop is done well the drums are kinda drowned out. as i say again u need to play with that bass line a little. but otha than that itz a good tune with a good sturcture GOOD WORK
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02-08-2005 17:03 |
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davieb1
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crazy mixdown, the drop could be mint as someone said need a bit more variation with the drum and the levels are everywhere but has the potential to be a good track. dave
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