BigFire 
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'BitStream' and post your comments here!!!
First time using a vocal samp recorded through my mixer.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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27-07-2005 01:35 |
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Bobby Dangerous
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Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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It's on it's way but i think that you can put a bit more into it. I like the synth work and the drum work seems to be in tact but could use some spicin up.
A key thing that i use to phaten my drums and run them through tube compressors or tape emulators to kind of give them that vintage warmth the the reast process to hell. Anyways work a bit more at it .
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27-07-2005 01:49 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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27-07-2005 04:38 |
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optikal_assassin
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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Hey man, not a bad start, but there's alot of things that could use some serious work.
Intro: Kinda boring man, doesn't get me pumped, seems a little too predictable in the sense it don't build much anticipation like when and how the drops gonna come in. Sounds rather empty too, I think it could use more atmosphere to fill it out. I liked that little effect you used. Is that the vocal sample you were talking about using?
Drop: Ehhh, it just don't come in hard enough for me. I was getting a feeling by the overall track you were aiming for something high energy and aggressive, but it just don't quite give me that feeling. The break work is ok, just seems too thin, not punchy enough. Maybe something harder, some layered beats or something to give it a little more ass.
Breakdown: Seems ok, about the same as the intro tho. Nothing too exciting.
The rest, well it's all about the same. Just doesn't change up enough for me. Basslines, pretty heavy tho. Synths are pretty good too.
All in all man, it's a good effort, but may I suggest some overdrive on the overall track, you know, just to give it a little zing. I think it'd make a huge difference in the whole overall sound. Maybe some more sounds from time to time as well, and it'll be rockin'. I'm gonna go with a 7/10. 
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27-07-2005 05:16 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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Intro is not that special. Put some more pads 'n strings in it.
Drop is ... 
like a mix of tunes trown in , they don't fit with eachother (imo)
There were some good elements , (pad after breakdown,...)
Drums seem to be ok allso.
There's just like no structure in the sense of placing your sounds...
Outro ?....
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27-07-2005 11:15 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Sound isn't great
Melodies are a bit messy...
Drums seem nice but need a boost and more punch.
Found the messy melodies to become rather annoying fast
Bassline isn't bad though...
Some good ideas but not great at all...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-07-2005 15:01 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Awe dude, love that vocal, at point's you got it soundin like a diggerydoo, how'd you do that. Fuck, it blend's so well, it's hard to tell when it's the synth, vocal, bass and or a reall sample of a diggerydoo.
Nice work man! As someone allready said, the intro is a bit bland but that drop is sick man! 
Nice work on the vocal's, that effect or whatever it is really unique man! Nice edit's on the bass, hugely aggresive, my fav.
Nice work Biggyfire's!
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29-07-2005 22:27 |
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I agree with my main man Dangerous on this track dude, phaten those drums, other than that Bad Man Chune!!
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