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BigFire 
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Ishido's Castle' and post your comments here!!!
Had allota fun writing this track 
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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27-07-2005 01:31 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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intro is fine...
the drop is sudden n nice....
drums are heavy and nice.... basslines are sweet, can probably have some more eq work(the overall tune)... i think, dunno fo sure, my speakers are fucked from raping them.
nice change ups .... there is some fast percs that u have added, they could use some volume variations... if u know what i mean.
break is alright.... drop is alright, same as the first... although the bassline has changed. its not bad, gets abit chilld out i think.
not a bad tune though.
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27-07-2005 04:35 |
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optikal_assassin
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Man, this track was different so to say. Wind fx in the intro gave it a nice touch, tho it did come in a little sudden later, too much stereo fx on it, like the little vocal samples used throughout too. The breaks seemed a tad too weak for my tastes tho. You had a nice variation of breaks tho, not sure they necessarily all fit together perfectly tho. But I gotta admit, that one heavy ass distorted bassline you used was pretty sick sounding. Especially when that shit hit low. I think the bass coulda been brought in a bit harder. Not sure I'm really feelin' the whole 8 bit synth sound. It sounded ok for the most part, just kinda sat wrong my ears from time to time. All in all man, it's a respectable lil' number. I'd give it a 6/10. Keep it real and keep them sounds comin'... 
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27-07-2005 05:27 |
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baz
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nice intro man try makin your wind a less hurtin to my ear 
drop is way fat man nice work
it's really a weird track but damn boy, you pmanaged to make me focus trough the whole thing
running hihats is nice too
synths work verry well
x-cept for the wind can't give you critics filter it a bit an it'll be fine
can tell you enjoyed makin this one
nice work
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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03-08-2005 13:37 |
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_-SetH-_
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This song is awesome 
I really was wondering how you made this sound so manga
It was like listening to the soundtrack of some horror anime movie, in the middle of an epic battle or a samurai running on and on through hordes of undead in the catacombs of some gloomy castle 
Ok, now for some tips...
Work on the bass. The subbass is ok I guess, but the song needs more hoovers. There are some hooverbreaks, but only in the middle. They are gone in the last part. Use them to give more punch (creepyness in this case) to the song. The hoovers can also be a bit louder, or eq'ed more in th elower range, make them "attack"...
Also, your arrangement is now something like "intro, a, b, drop(with the wind...), b"
I would love it when there was a buildup followed by an over the top part. I mean, you know these songs when suddenly there is something completely different dropping in, usually very hard and breaky.
So maybe u could do "intro, a, b, drop, overthetop, b" or
"intro, a, b, buildup, overthetop, drop, b"...
Just my two cents
Keep up the good work
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03-08-2005 20:45 |
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Surya
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The themes and switches are very cool, but the drums don't have any power...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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06-08-2005 18:18 |
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Nice sound on the synth's, nice bass dude!
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my sound
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06-08-2005 20:08 |
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Halph-Price
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i like this start. got a nice lo-fi feel to it.
the delay's coming in, kinda repative.
coulda faded the static noise out before bassline, woulda gave a better feel of it being big and loud like. contrast.
the vocal's repeate too much, yes, we know you got terrible visablity.
drop kinda scrwed up by static noise the second time around. and again the same vocal sample. you need discretion with that really.
eh, song kinda is weak and repetative. it's about the same volume and dynamic the entire time. need's to have a bit more punch, even if just a different vocal to come in clear. would help a lot.
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07-08-2005 06:15 |
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