Nice intro, I really like the bass, Reminds me of an amon tobin tune.
The high synths are nice too and work well together.
The drums come in a bit unanounced, and there wasnt any sign of a real drop.
You say that this is unfinished and by the time it got to the end, there were a few places which seem fairly bare. Like the stabs at 1;44 and later on aswell.
I think the bass is nice but you should save it untill the drums come in to give the drop more punch, or maybe, in the intro use a high pass on it.
Im not sure where your going with this, whether youre building up to a bigger drop, or whether this was the main heavy section. I think this sounds nice as a start of a tune, but it needs a heavier drop later to really kick in. Maybe drop out to just the high synths and vocal sample, build it up with loads of atmospherics, build up the drums too. Then drop into something a bit heavier, maybe even use the same bass with more distortion, I dont know why but, although the bass is real nice. It doesnt seem all that heavy, which it should. Maybe its the drums, prehaps more ghost rolls and some hi hat movement would help this.
I like this so far but really needs to drop in a heavy way to maintain the mood created by the intro, the intro is really nice though
I liked it. That was nice. My only probelm is that the into was a little long for such a short clip, but is does seem like the song would be longer that what's downloadable, so it's okay.
But yeah, that was right up my alley. Very dieselboy-ish.
nice edit on the drumz but the introsynth i think is just a litlle too cliché(no offense tough)
your drop's quite allright nice drumz
your bass is fat but seriously needs lowpass filter
(when i was listening it was on my regular soundblasters and they will never be the same again
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anyway nice track hope you keep it up till it's finished an do something bout those low passes
feeling the darkness! this is my kinda tune love the mood that you've created with this track. Unfortunately im not listening to it on really loud speakers - think would get the full effect of the sub bass if i did. I like the pitch bending of the basslines - always a winner. The synths you've used are interesting, niceley integrated with the overall rhythm. Not a criticism but an opinion - more dark vocal samples fx'd could give this track a bit more life (possibly pitched down vocals always sound dark with a bit of delay on). Finally on the drums some klang samples would fit nicely on the top end (or samurai sword style samples). Nice tune overall man, i'm impressed
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