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Please check out my new track 'quest ' and post your comments here!!!
this ones kind of jump upy sorry if it's too short
this one should work
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26-07-2005 01:35 |
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S.O.T.A.
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really? thanks very much!So you like the stutter step stuff huh?
I like your avatar if you require any anime pics I'd be happy to send you some of any anime well almost just say so
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26-07-2005 04:37 |
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yeah nice tune bruz....
is that some DoruMalaia sounds fx i can hear in there.
basslines are SOTA fun.... drums sound like they is done by you, n they sound good bruz. heaps of variation.... although i think u may have to clean up some of the variations... just layer them n clean them up abit... I THINK, just to get it sounding really nice and smooth....
the voicy pad sounds cool. nice structure... and production is fairly sweet.
first drop is fun too lol.
keep up the mad tuneage mate. u will make some quality shit once u got all the tekniques down pat.
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26-07-2005 05:06 |
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Yeah I love dorumalaia! I have like 10 refills. I kind of ran out the door as I was putting this one up the one bass riff in the second part sounds really dirty sorry to everyones speakers. This song started out kind of as a joke. It had a really sped up vocal that sounded funny but I didn't think anyone would take it seriously so I tuned it a little and it ended up being totally different. The stutterstep is a bit comical because it was part of the original. Any way boy I sure love to hear myself talk HA
COOL LATER THEN
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26-07-2005 06:14 |
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optikal_assassin
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Right on, Right on. Not sure if you were doing this track as a complete project but it's not bad. Not even sure if it's a final thing either. Just going off what I hear soo far, you got alot of good sound variations, just maybe need to work on the break variations. The basslines weren't bad either. It's a good start man, just needs alot more structure tho. Needs a better intro too, just come sin too abruptly and goes out the same way. Like I said, I'm not sure where you originally intended for this to go so I won't be too overly critical, but it's pretty cool soo far.
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26-07-2005 10:29 |
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Greyone
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Intro: Starts of quick , maybe let the drums in later ?
Drop : Yeh, just what i expected , nice bass (maybe some highpass filtering ) , maybe put some sub in it . Drums are nice performed to , like the rides a lot. maybe bring the hats more to the front...
2nd drop : imo you should put some killer hats and rides in it so it yet more intensive than the first one. Or boost the high freq.
Outro: ...?
Overall sounds really good , alldough the structure isn't that great ( make yo intro longer , drops longer ,outro)
I see a hugh improvement , so big up man.
But put some more elements in this track , cause now it's kinda empty with one bassline and a basic melo.
Just finish it with some more stuff.
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26-07-2005 12:41 |
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S.O.T.A.
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26-07-2005 12:53 |
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too bad ain't got no intro tough
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26-07-2005 14:11 |
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PassDa J.
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Nice stuff man ...
K, to bad there's no intro and outro, that would make the song a lil' longer no ??? You only got 2:14 here, I guess with a good intro and outro you can change that to > 3:00
But I have no idea if this is the finished version or not so I'll leave it like this ...
K, now for the real review, I love allot of sounds u used inthere, like that " ow " sound and that trumpet-like effect that changes into a womens voice ... nice stuff man gives a nice atmosphere ...
Nice drums you got there, like the hihats very much aspecially @ 00:32 when the shit starts to hit, like you said you got a real jumpy rhytm there ... like that style ... the different basslines are cool, lots of different effects ... and they work together with the gentle kick ... that off-beat part at 00:57 is pretty cool
enjoyed that shit ...
I'll give you 8/10 ... to bad there's no intro and outro ... gather that shit together and you got a nice score
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26-07-2005 14:26 |
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right from the start I like this one more than your other recent 'jango'
basslines rock here. when the stuttery rhythm kiks in and makes the shift it becomes really good. I'd loose the ahhhh vocals there, in fact Im not sure it fits earlier on
nevertheless, cools sounds going on, nice breaks and switches
what did you do to the dynamics of the bass before the stutter, one hit is too loud, I dig the idea with the volume shift but imo is too much of a difference between the hits
this is not finished / need refinement, but it's enough to recognize a good track: decent levels, good sound choice
edit: if youre ok with sharing this let me know, Id like to do a remix
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cynik: 27-07-2005 18:49.
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27-07-2005 18:47 |
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I've been meaning to get around to reviewing this, been bizy bizy. Anyhoo here it is, 00:57> That off beat shit or stutter as you call it is pure phatness man, some really skilled shit! More of that would certianly do the trick imo. Nice work with the reverse hit at the end of the odd loop 00:54 is an example, perfectly placed. Yeah, does cut out abrubtly, I assume a work in progress? Anyway that stutter stuff is right up my alley you funky soul man. Please do more of this! Nice work crazy S.O.T.A. Cheer's for that stutter shit has inspired me to give it a try!
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29-07-2005 06:37 |
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S.O.T.A.
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hell yeah listen to another planet(pendulum) or floodlight(fresh)
thanks for listening apperantly cynik is going to remix it
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29-07-2005 07:18 |
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cynik
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Originally posted by S.O.T.A.
hell yeah listen to another planet(pendulum) or floodlight(fresh)
thanks for listening apperantly cynik is going to remix it |
I will, but without any of those dorumalaia fx tho - havent got the refills. but the beats and basses are all there
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29-07-2005 07:34 |
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S.O.T.A.
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that's cool I'll snd them to you if you want
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29-07-2005 07:36 |
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The distorted snare is kinda cool
The drums don't have a lot of punch though...
Basslines are cool
Drums drown in the mix
Not feelin the swingbeat part, it seems to be offbeat...
Some good ideas, but ultimatly not very good, I'm afraid...
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even just one of thoes crazy sounds reversed would have been a suitable intro. the one you use before the bassline preferably.
oh wow, nice regge swing to that shit man, awsome!
real organized.
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13-08-2005 19:06 |
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