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deep'n'dark 
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Registration Date: 25-04-2004
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23-07-2005 19:56 |
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deep'n'dark
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tune is now updated 
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28-07-2005 13:08 |
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TechDiff
Hetty Jakes Pretentious Cheese Wog
Registration Date: 14-06-2005
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Nice atmosphere at the intro, it all sounds a little.. familiar, just not all that different from alot of other tunes. The bass is nice and the drums roll along nicely, some nice ambient noises in there too. The cymbel sounds a bit tacky. I like the brakedown with the vocals. Its a shame to bring the same bass line back in, I was starting to get a bit bored of it. Cool bit of guitar, or thats what it sounds like anyway.
This a nicely made tume but just doesnt really keep me interested enough, I was left waiting for a big something which just didnt happen.
Not to be unfair but its just a bit of a non-tune, The production is good and the sounds are nice, but in terms of a hook or real catchy-ness and individual style there isnt much to speek of. This is only my personal opinion and I'm sure other people will like it more than me, but I just didnt dig it all that much.
Also, not to be unfair but looking at the number of posts youve made in over a year, I get the impresion that you only come on here to get reveiws for your tunes. Maybe if you took the time to reveiw other peoples then prehaps youd get more reveiws in return. Sorry if I'm wrong but thats how it seems.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by TechDiff: 28-07-2005 13:40.
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28-07-2005 13:27 |
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Greyone
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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Intro is nice 'n loud .
Drop isn't that great , when u use the same reece as in yo buildup , then make shure you ad something to it , like some high ellements.
Or make it darker.
The mainmelody is a bit simple , isn't it (that hit)
Breakdown is cool indeed ! But put some more variation in that bass !
2nd drop isn't convincing me , just another dnb track. Drums sound a little bit too filterd (snare doesn't come out good)
I see you worked on it , and it's a nice sounding track but...
This track needs lots of variation.
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28-07-2005 13:54 |
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