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teknyne
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Please check out my new track 'ALL NIGHT (AUDIOLAB THEME)' and post your comments here!!!
Heres the final version of the track i uploaded the other week. Still needs work but its doin me nut in so i'm gonna crack on with a new tune.
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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22-07-2005 20:45 |
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23-07-2005 05:42 |
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optikal_assassin
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oh damn, this track IS rokkin'. equipped definitely made a good point tho, the drums got a little drowned out by the lead synth tho once everything started kicking in. They were there but the synth just kinda robbed the show. As a personal preference tho I would've like to see a heavier underlying bass line tho, that woulda just made this track kill even more. The lead synth had a little too much presence, I think the stereo wideness coulda been brough down a tad since it just damn near swallowed everything else up, but aside from those little points, the shit was smokin' I'm gonna give it a 9/10, big thumbs up yo.
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23-07-2005 06:02 |
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teknyne
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cheers for the feedback people, good to hear wot people reckon needs fixin cuz ive heared it that many times now that i cant possibly judge it anymore! thanx again
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23-07-2005 12:57 |
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PassDa J.
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Hmmmm unlike the others this song didn't really got me pumped up, you produced it pretty tight but it's just not my style of dnb, I don't like the vocals and aspecially when it echo's fall in ... totally off-beat man ...
The breaks are pretty nice, but they don't give me a dance-feeling, or headbang-feeling ... I just don't feel the rhytm in it, and the sounds you used are a bit dry to me, a lil' standard ... And there's a high tone inthere I really dislike ... O yeah and the crashes in the intro really suck .. change those ...
Sorry but I'll have to give ya a 5.5/10
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23-07-2005 13:11 |
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Good intro, sweet drums
Like how that phat synth drops in
Drop: wickid drums, Panachea like use of vocals, which is kinda cool. Just some more hooverin and thisone would be a true Panachea track
Sub is lacking on thisone though, and the drums could use a slight boost.
Nice track, but with room for improvement
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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23-07-2005 18:38 |
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DJ Hybrid K
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very nice. the synth at the begining seems a bit high in volume. but the bass. the bass is fucking awesome the drums are to low. the vocal is perfect.
4/5
bring the drums up and it would be 5/5
the production is good, the drums seem crisp and clear(jusyt low in volume)
good job!
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24-07-2005 00:44 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
Hmmmm unlike the others this song didn't really got me pumped up, you produced it pretty tight but it's just not my style of dnb |
fair play mate.
Thanks to every1 for postin their comments,
keep em coming
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24-07-2005 11:47 |
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I'm not really fond of the intro , but when the drums drop , it's all ok
Massive break , vocal realy fits in the track.
Shit those cutted breaks are so great ! You should pump the volume up.
Synth are nice too.
Drops lack power
, Boost them up a bit.
Very cool track indeed
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24-07-2005 12:07 |
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Nick ZZ
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Intro is not bad, just a little short, needs to be a little longer to make it a little deeper, just before you add the drumz. The drop is good, like woman singing, and the way you echoed her voice is dope. The drop is nice and heavy, like the synth. The chopping stutters are dope. great work 10/10
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25-07-2005 11:30 |
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anf0 D
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intro is good and drums are cool
vocal is alright with nice dely
the synths are cool
the sub does need more power
the drop was alright
structure is cool, and production is pretty good.
its got cool mellodies
break around the 4 min mark is cool
drop is cool
but yeah the sub needs more power!
cool track tek9, keep em coming.
7/10 could be higher eazly, just the sub power wasnt there.
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26-07-2005 07:10 |
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teknyne
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yea i'm with you on that sub issue anf0. U got any tips for gettin a nice meaty sub sound? My mate said something about using a 909 kick with a bp filter and sending it to a distortion unit but i couldnt get the right sound that way. thanks for the feedback
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26-07-2005 08:55 |
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optikal_assassin
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Sorry to drop in on this one again, I just happen to notice you're looking for a way to get a nice meaty sub sound. Instead of using a 909 kick, I like to start with a clean 808 bass drum with a nice long decay on it so I can go back and adjust it later. First try distortion before all else, then filter. I guess it depends on what program you use for mixing, but I use FL Studio and in the FX panel I like to run the fast distortion first, followed by a filter. The thing I do tho is use two 808 bass drums, one for distorting the hell out of, then layer another 808 bass drum under it for the sub bass, seems to give a warmer bass sound that way. The first drum I'll use the distortion in combination with a high pass filter followed by some eq'ing and possibly some subtle reverb depending on what effect I'm trying to achieve. Then I'll lay the the other 808 bass drum under it and cut out all signs of higher frequencies out of it and notch up the bass that way. Sorry if this makes no sense, and if you need me to explain anything, feel free to ask. Hope this deos help tho, just trying to help where I can.
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26-07-2005 09:03 |
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chill intro..
pretty much a calm drop (sure it was ment to)
tight drumz an fuckin fat vocal sample
too bad it's a bit to silent but really like it
really man turn up the vocal
it rules
nice jungle-like cuttin on those breakz
synths get pushy ass hell
got us a dancefloor track right here
tight as hell man, respect
__ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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26-07-2005 14:39 |
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PassDa J.
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Yeah
Don't get me wrong here don't wonna be a pain in the ass or something, but I see you understand my point of view
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26-07-2005 14:54 |
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teknyne
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
Yeah
Don't get me wrong here don't wonna be a pain in the ass or something, but I see you understand my point of view
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of course, not every1 is going to like every tune. Thats why we have diff styles innit
thanks for checkin out my stuff
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26-07-2005 16:57 |
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anf0 D
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Originally posted by teknyne
My mate said something about using a 909 kick with a bp filter and sending it to a distortion unit but i couldnt get the right sound that way. thanks for the feedback
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yeah you can probably do it that way... for a sub i just a sub sample and EQ compress it mayb n mayb some distortion(if u want a distorted sound)
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