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Sensa 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Losing My Mind' and post your comments here!!!
not sure about this one! feedback appreciated!
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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www.revoltagerecordings.com
+44 (0) 7904966436
Email: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
MSN: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
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22-07-2005 14:39 |
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the lead at the intro could maybe do with a bit more sizzle....make it sound a bit more fried.its probably a bit to clean.......
theres a lot of reverb going on......
drop is ok....but after the intro i wa expecting something a lot harder...if anything it sounds to clear
i like it.but make it more fuzzy
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22-07-2005 15:28 |
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who rated this 10/10?????
cause i didnt........
7/10
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by utter muppet: 22-07-2005 16:46.
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22-07-2005 16:45 |
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PassDa J.
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Goddamn boy are you rating yourself cause you allready got 4 tumbs up ?????? 
And only 2 reviews ... from the same guy !!!!! 
Something ain't right here ... SAD SHIT BOY
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22-07-2005 17:16 |
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DJ-Jimmy
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Registration Date: 22-07-2005
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10/10 TUNES WICKED, keep um comin!
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22-07-2005 17:31 |
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DJ-Jimmy
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Registration Date: 22-07-2005
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im new here, i hope the tunes on this site are just as good, going to check now!
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22-07-2005 17:33 |
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wTrouble
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ez
like what you're doing here, here's where I feel you could improve...
In general, I think your synth lines could do with some work, firstly they are a little too clean in the way they sound a bit presety/cheesey. Try playing around with the variables to get a less 'out of the box' feel to them.
Also look at the structure of your melody as it feels really repetitive/loopy as its only one bar. Try and work some variation or something to get away from the loopy sound. Also try to add variation throughout the length of the track - you'll get what I'm saying if you open the track in media player or something and click at various points along the time line - its all a bit samey.
Lastly, the slower '4 times a bar' open hat gets a bit repetitive - not saying lose it as it is nice in the tune, maybe vary the velocities slightly and give it some variation throughout the track, maybe get an alternative pattern on the go in places.
Definate potential though - keep at it!
Peace,
wT
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22-07-2005 18:14 |
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Surya
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Buildup is allright although the vocals sound a bit goofy...
Drop: Nice groove you got going on, decent for a jump up tune.
Quite repetetive, but thats part of the genre.
Nice one, but nothing spectacular.
Thisone contains a sample from The Shining, so we'll have to delete it...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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24-07-2005 19:15 |
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anf0 D
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yeah the intro sounds sound like they could be phatter if u know what im sayin.... could b my speakers though...
build up is cool. the drop is sweet. nice groove indeed. nice n bouncin.
full of bouncy fun. i enjoyd listening
7/10 could be higher.... just needs some tweakn here n there. but its all there.
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25-07-2005 02:56 |
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Greyone
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Long time ago i heared some trancestep...or is it jump-up...or both.
I think you should 'disguise' the vocals more.
Intro seems to be ok , buildup can be more intensive (make it high end and FX and stuff)
Drop : I think it can use a slight boost. Where's the sub ? Good for jumpup. Different variations in the tune makes it interesting.
Breakdown: is cool , but the vocals are a bit overused.
2nd Drop: Same for drop1
Outro : is ok too.
It's a nice sounding track , but it didn't 
me , if you know what i mean. I think it's just not my type of dnb.
Keep it up Senz.. 
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25-07-2005 11:11 |
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Nick ZZ
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The intro is alright. Like the synth in the drop, it's not a massive one, but I like it alot!!! The here's Johnny vocals are funny or a little silly 
, I don't think they fit perfectly. The Drums are good. Z
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25-07-2005 11:43 |
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vkrishna
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Registration Date: 16-11-2004
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i like very much your drums, punchy and fat good variation with the synth and the basslines and good balance in the mix.
Very good work man !!!!!!!!
even if your song is not a fucking tek step anthem that will rock up all the worldwide dancefloors, it's a good song not doubt about it !!!!!
cheers man keep on rocking !!!!!!
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25-07-2005 15:20 |
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optikal_assassin
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Intro: needs to be ruffened up a tad and maybe louder, just doesn't seem to build enough anticipation for me, but it did sound descent tho.
Drop: This plays right off the intro man and I don't think they complimented each other enough. I think you should paused out the end of the intro a tad to get everyone wondering what was gonna come out next, but when the drop kicke din, it just didn't hit me hard enough.
Vocal Samples: I don't think they fit the nature of the track, especially the "Here's Johnny" 
The rest of the track was descent too, just think it coulda been harder, like stronger beats. The synth you got going on wasn't too bad, had a descent melody, just think the track as a whole coulda done better with a harder bottom end. I think more break variations would have done nicely too. All in all man it's a pretty solid tune, but just didn't seem to really have my head bobbing. Close but not quite. Hope this helps and 
for the great track.
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26-07-2005 10:40 |
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PassDa J.
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Really didn't like the intro, but the song is cool, you got some copywritten v-samples inthere .. I think they are from the shining .. " Here's Johnny" did it for me..
The levels could be better man, but you got a cool snare there, hihats are ok ...
7.5/10 like the bassline
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26-07-2005 15:34 |
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