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in my opinion i think you should use that synth that has a sort of piano stab sound too it more... plus its very quite... raise the volume...
ive liked this track from the start though and i cant remember what i said when i reviewed this track on the last thread but this does sound improved sound quality wise... levels have improved... bass is cool... just id like to hear more o that sound or more stabs added which are like it...
nie track tho mate gota say 
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20-07-2005 18:25 |
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PassDa J.
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I'll only review it when it's finished, believe me you don't want info from me ... 
It wouldn't do you good 
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20-07-2005 18:35 |
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Sensa
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ok listening now, drums on the intro are nice and crisp.......that vocal sounds well eq-ed, the drop is nice. Imo the bass the tune needs a better hook it seems a bit repetitive and theres nothing in there to bang ya head away. But production wise very well done mate cant knock the production at all.
anyways good work, cant wait to hear the finished product
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20-07-2005 19:34 |
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optikal_assassin
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What up Jimmy C, just thought I'd put in my two cents on this piece. I think the two strongest parts of this track soo far are the breaks and the bass. IMHO the synth stabs you use don't quite fit. It just seems a little too outta place. Maybe a different synth overall would do it some good. It sounds a little too trancy. I think it could use more variation in the breaks and different sounds as well.I know you say it's not quite there so if you plan on finishing this, maybe try some more different sounds and variations. Maybe put a little more grunge on the bassline too to make it a little more present if that makes sense. Hope this was helpful for ya, it's just really hard to say what could be better or different since noone really knows what direction you want this track to go but you. I'm not gonna rate this with a number tho since it's not finished product but hopefully my little review might help ya soo far. Good luck with this one.
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21-07-2005 01:03 |
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Surya
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Decent drums, good bassline, nice trancey bits. Good track. Nothing more to add acually...
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24-07-2005 19:28 |
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vkrishna
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well done mate, so good to me : good drum nice atmosphere.
sure it's not tel step stuff but all the elements are fitting together.
think that you can be proud of this one.
have u try to contact some label or send it to radio just to know what they think?
you need to ...
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25-07-2005 15:38 |
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Dude, Great track! The drums are specifically dope, very crisp. I did like the sample work though it was all at the best possible level. I do think you could have tweeked the filter a bit better on the drop. Out of curiousity what program did you use to construct the track, sounds like reason to me. I think with a little more atmosphere you'll be making the massive bounce. Big Up!
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27-07-2005 00:37 |
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TechDiff
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This is quite nice, the beat is far to ridgid for my liking, and the stabs, although adding a nice atmosphere, are a bit tacky and get a bit boring after a while The vocal sample is nice but is really unrelated to the rest of the tune, as is the title.(In my un-profesional opinion!)
The bass however is cool and has a nice roll to it. The track fits together nicely and flows fairly well. It does all sound a bit sparse though, it just seems a little too bare boned.
Youve got the style down and although its not really my taste its a good tune.
I think if you add another variation on the bass line and some nice atmosheric sounds this would really come alive, also try to find a more sutable sample. I asume from the title this is unfinished, I think all this really needs is some window dressing, The listle bits of ear candy which stop your concentration from lapsing, which not to be harsh, happened to me while listening.
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