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catchy vocal...what the fuck is it saying?
snare could do with more high to it....try layering something like an open hi hat with a shoet decay on it over the top..or another snare with more crack to it.....
dude its not bad.......but you really need to turn the sub up (if there is any!!!!!) the lead sound is cool...but badly needs some sub to go with it.
maybe some more percussion as well.
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18-07-2005 16:50 |
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nice track
don't know what the voice is saying but it's cool
intro is nice but verry sudden
drums chosen very nice
love the part startin at 1:28 nice bass 
goin straight here for a litlle while (dancefloor shit) 
the fading synth at 2:34 is done pretty well to (maybe a bit to much distortion)
there goe the vocal again.... 
bit boring
but uhten at 4:17 another icecold bone-cuttin synth hits my ears
an the shit gets going even better than befor
realy love the last part ..respect man
rate this shit 9/10 because of the disorted bass elseway it's a ten for sure
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18-07-2005 21:32 |
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"Your dis-intrest draw's me in." 
That's what I think it's saying. Nice work again man, your a mad man, those synth's sound massive!!! There wasn't much bass present in them though? Drum's could be more interesting. Nice work though dude. Did you just make this?? Anyway. Cheers ++Stu Maggoo++
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18-07-2005 23:35 |
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Tonedef
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ye i made it today... not finished at all yet just made a preview because i loved that synth that i made and thought you guys might like to hear it... will spend time on it soon and release the finished piece
munki: ye the bass is low at times non-existant... you wouldnt believe how long it took me to contain that main synth otherwise the track would of sounded really messy... but il work on it... thanks for the reviews so far really appreciate comments for the hard work
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19-07-2005 00:33 |
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PassDa J.
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cool intro, the voice-sample comes in great, very-onbeat you got some pro-producing there m8 ...
nice bass at 0:40 or somewhere around it ... you should have put it a lit louder dude ...
'Your disinterest draws me in' works a bit on the nerves after a while, the sample is great but she's got an anoying voice at a certain time ...
Nice aggri shit you got goin' on there, to bad the bass is a bit distorted ... or was it your intension? ...
The drum-line sounds great, doesn't work on the nerves ... like the part at 3:20 haha nice stuff ...
4:00 draws ME in hahaha that's some great shit man ... wow it really got me pumped up man ... had the urge to punch someone in the nuts ... wow that's some AGRI shit dude ... like your style, what a break, like it ... has a Metal kinda feelin ...
9/10 nice job ...
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19-07-2005 01:02 |
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Tonedef
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ye your right that sample needs cutting in places.. thanks for the tip
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19-07-2005 01:04 |
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Surya
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Oh man, that is some fucked up intro! Don't like it too much...
Drop is quite nice.
I kinda like the bodies, but the intros and breakdowns, dunno. A bit too fucked up imo.
Oh yeah, I think you slightly overcompressed it...
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19-07-2005 11:12 |
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Shit, that was one wikkid intro, some may not like it, but I think it's got a style to it I like. From like 1:05 to 1:27 was a little ehhhh, kinda killed the flow of the track, ya know just kinda seemed a bit outta place, but when that synth starts coming in, it starts to shape back up again, and man when it dropped it took off, but it was lacking some bottom end to really give it that much more of a take off. It's amazing how much a huge difference bass will make when a tune drops. Nothing like a searing bass wave to rip through the joint when the drop kicks in. The main bass synth was pretty sick too, good job on that, maybe some more eq'ing on it (low end) and making it sound a bit more fuller will make it even that much better. Nice break programming too. All in all man, this track is pretty hype. Alot different from what I'm used to hearing. Imma give it a big 8.5/10 just as a personal opinion.
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20-07-2005 09:42 |
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haha...