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17-07-2005 22:55 |
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personally id thin that intro pad out , maybe drop out some of the low end with eq.
nice rolling vibe though.....not sure about the bell sounds when it kicks in....
the beats sound quite familiar as well.....some sexy saxaphone would really round it off.....i think it needs some horns just to keep me interested....and more sub.....give it more of a catchy rolling b line..something like calibres laid back stuff.....i like the spoken sample...made me smile.but would be better if you got rid of it and had a smooth vocal in there imo.
good though...
id like to remix it....and add the bits ive suggested....given a few tweaks its the sort of thing i think defunked or hospital records might consider...
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17-07-2005 23:24 |
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Tonedef
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ye munki your welcome to it mate after hearin your last track definately... just let me know what you need
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17-07-2005 23:26 |
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Surya
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Intro, quite nice, but don't overuse it or it might become boring fast
Drums kicking in: a bit too smooth for my taste, give them a bit more edge
Vocal could use some compression, some parts are too loud, some need a boost.
Drop: bassline isn't loud enuf, I almost can't hear it.
Nice chilltrack with nice atmosphere. Not too happy sounding like a lot of the 'summer' tunes.
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18-07-2005 12:41 |
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20-07-2005 11:59 |
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PassDa J.
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Man I love your producing bro ...
At first I thought this wasn't a summer-like intro at all, but when evereything got inthere my opinion changed pretty fast, it's more of a summer-evening song 
When it's a lil' darker ... more loungy ... 
I love the bell comin' in at 1:48 ... wow that was the shit nice echo's real comfortable feeling you created there ... the drums are cool very chill ...
To bad I can't really understand what the voice-sample says ... but it sounds good ( It would've been better with a Spanish boy talking but what the hell ey )
The furder the song evols the more loungy it comes, you created a very chilly sphere there man ... the sounds in the background gave me the chills ... everey sound you ad during the song heats up the sphere ...
You worked to a climax, nicely done ... to bad the synth doesn't change that much ... but it doesn't really work on the nerves cause there are so much more sounds to pay attention to ...
I think you should've done the outro with the same synth you started with and maybe some birds cherping in the back ... that woul've given it a realistic and warm feeling ...
Like this shit very much dude ... 8.5/10 nice work
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20-07-2005 12:19 |
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Muad'Dib
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Ok, these are very queer sounds. And they are little offbeat (when strking together with that hihat). Ok, there is the beat. Very clear production, imo, but those queer synths at the begining are little..hmm... messy?
I like the snappy snare sound. So, you added some vinyl cracks huh? Nice touch...
Ok, the main beat strikes. Nice levels on the sounds, and great production. Ok the snare now is a bit quiet, try adding a bit volume to it.
Wow, what an atmo you have created in my head! Traveling tune this is, which I would like to have in my car when travelling on long roads, that's for sure! 
Ok, you change the atmosphere now with that bass and the new beat, that's nice. Maybe because of the reverb, or the quietness (or the both) you snare is a bit too distant, like it strikes in the background. I would prefer a little more clear snare in the front audio space, but that's my choice 
The choon gets a bit boring in the second part. The ending is nice, with that bell sound striking everywhere.. I juz love it...
Nooooooooo, not fadeout again... damn 
Ahh nevermind,
you got 8/10 from me
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17-11-2005 14:09 |
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wreakon
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love it! reminds me alot of lemon jelly! Just needs something more to get it going.. like some layers of guitar or sumin
wicked though
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20-11-2005 13:55 |
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Right on man, another deep soulfull track 
