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Rude 
I'm gonna get you
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Please check out my new track 'The Outbreak ' and post your comments here!!!
All my breaks are made of ONE SHOTS !!!
*proud as fuck*
What do you guys think? Am I gonna be a good father? (the story I made lol) (yea it's my voice)
Anyway, this is the shit
hope you'll enjoy it
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17-07-2005 18:15 |
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PassDa J.
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Cool intro, has a thrillermovie feel to it ...
The first drumline is cool, nice kick, nice snare, nice hihat ... the voice-sample u made is a bit strange, not realy an evil voice you have there huh 
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The song has a nice flow man, nice breaks, the reversed hihat sounds cool, fits in ... allthough it's very empty ...
Is this the finished version? Very short huh, not so much special about it
7/10 ...
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17-07-2005 18:49 |
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Rude
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Hmmm yea well it's not really EVIL EVIL EVIL
it's more like... the real thing, u know?
Anywayz, thanks for the review 
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17-07-2005 19:05 |
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Sensa
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spooky intro,
very different to what im used to hearing off u
quite experimental, the b line blends well with the spooky intro
drums are nice and crisp and theres a nice variation in the breaks, keeps it intresting
good work 
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17-07-2005 19:19 |
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yeh like the intro..sounds a bit like that tune by evanescence (i think ) yknow wake me up or something...dodgy rawk tune,lol......nice atmos though.but the beats are way to short....could have done with a longer intro...
not sure about the vocal bit..needs turning up a little.....
style reece style lead could do with a bit more fuzziness imo....
i think you also need to work on the drop.....it doesnt have much impact......but good ideas.
and no you dont really sound evil...its more sci fi.
sounds like it could have been taken from finalfantasy or something similar. you should check out waves ultrapitch to make it sound more scary........you to can sound like the borg!
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17-07-2005 20:22 |
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equipped
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Nice work, yeah the voice sample could use some mayham. This sound's really well produced, extreemly clean sounding. The drum's have some really good part's like what you do at 2:24-2:26>very nice indeed 
. Oh there's another one 3:49. Drum's sound really good at these part's more of this would make the drum's allot more interesting! Like the intro 1:04 that's a huge sound!
Those cymbl samples sound nice and crispy clean. Your reese follow's the track to much imo, more off beat editing would spice thing's up. Huge sounding track lot's of killer sound's and beef. Well done dude hope comment's help. 
++Stu Maggoo++
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17-07-2005 22:23 |
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Rude
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Thanks for the review man
support means alot te me
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17-07-2005 22:26 |
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Tonedef
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not bad.....
i love the intro i was waiting for something BIG to drop but what i heard was alright..
like the work you put into your drums it paid off... but the rest is a bit plain in my opinion... if the sci-fi sounding main tune is what your going for i would add 1 or 2 lower synths to it to give it that extra feel...
nice one tho... could be big
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17-07-2005 22:45 |
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Surya
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Ya, nice intro
Drums: not bad, but not the kind I would have used to go with this melody... Kick sounds slightly too digital imo...
Vocals: a bit dry, no? Anyway, you speak like a Flemish guy speaking English :p
The buzzing bassline is far from great...
Nice work on the hats and rides
I would layer a few more snares over thisone, to give it a bit more punch and snap...
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18-07-2005 12:49 |
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drumJoyce
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Hey this is some good shit man, I don't know about Surya's comment, but dnb should sound a bit digital man
Anyway thanks for the earcandy
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18-07-2005 14:08 |
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Rude
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WHAT ?! 2 STARS?! THERE WERE 4 STARS 3 HOURS AGO !!!
WHO GAVE ME A 1 GODDAMNIT?!?!?!
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18-07-2005 19:21 |
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Surya
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I didn't. But 4 stars was obviously too much, maybe the first voters just gave you too much to start with?
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18-07-2005 20:41 |
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PassDa J.
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Please RUDE get yourself another signature ... it's drivin' me mad, I'm not ADHD ... let's keep it that way
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18-07-2005 20:45 |
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Rude
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Heh it's supposed to get peoples attention
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18-07-2005 21:48 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by Rude
Heh it's supposed to get peoples attention |
I've sent you a PM about it today, check it please
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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18-07-2005 22:13 |
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Originally posted by PassDa J.
Please RUDE get yourself another signature ... it's drivin' me mad, I'm not ADHD ... let's keep it that way
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yeah d00d... hurting my eyes... because of this i am unable to review ur tune...
i have eye damage and cant hear tunes at the moment 
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19-07-2005 03:36 |
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Check it...Just my little opinion....
Kinda like evanescence meets resident evil in that intro, kinda like what munki C said, but it was a pretty spooky intro. Kinda thought the drop coulda been a bit more explosive like some mad ass basslines and reeces just tearin' it up. Just think it could've used some more of a raw sound to it for this kinda track. Sounds to me like you kinda rushed this track a bit, didn't really seem as complete as it could've been, but great job on the break programming. I think breaks from scratch can be one of the hardest things when writing a track, since I feel the break can make a track or break it followed by everything else. Had good variations in the breaks too, so it didn't sound overly repetitive. All in all man, just as a personal opinion, I gave it a 5/10. Alot of things could've been worked upon, but had it's qualities at the same time.
OptiKal
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19-07-2005 05:02 |
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19-07-2005 18:39 |
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Bobby Dangerous
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Well personally i thought the intro was hype and then it drove into somthing that kind of didn't hit me as hard as i thought that the intro was leeding to the drop. You could beef it up a lot more then what your build up is @ the moment. The song in general has a lot of potential but is missing somthing. I don't know if the drums really work with it. The synth is hype. Sounds like sawtooth16 over sawtooth 4 in the malstrom from Reason. All in all the concept is really cool that eary intro and the dirtyness that the whole atmosphere of that chune has. You need to really dig into it and brake out whats really inside you and just let go. It kind of sounds like you are all there but you arent releasing it into the track. Don't get me wrong though it always happens to me but i burn my tracks on cd then have a listen over a week then my brain and heart combine and bring everything together with the ideas that are burried with in.
Keep it up though nice start man.
Wicked....
"Dangerous"
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