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Nosrac 
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Crazy intro - sounds a bit too dry and vstish though and then cuts out abruptly. I like the dry stab synth though. The drums come in full and heavy. I like the build at 1:20 (add some reverb to the hits), there's a timing error at 1:22, The high sound at 1:30 is way too loud and kinda messes it up until 2:30. The snare that comes in there though is good and subtle hi hat triplets give the step beat some funk. Vocal sample is a bit too loud and reverb trail gets cut off - a bit repetitive though. More timing problems at 4:30ish and with the scratching. Lots of experimenting as you said which is cool but goes on too long to be a proper song with somewhat typical structure. I like the loop cutting at 5:10 - back it up with some sub, layer another beat and that could be a bass to a track. Wisper vocals are too loud too, but I like the effect on "nothing man". Got rolling okay right at the end but hats were too loud. No disrespect whatsoever - just experimentation right. Keep working at it bro.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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13-07-2005 07:54 |
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baz
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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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an now you've mentioned it,those hats at the end really are too loud 
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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13-07-2005 16:36 |
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Surya
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Drums need a lil boost, they're a bit overpowered.
Not to sure about the hard panning on some stuff, don't go to extreme in panning!
Hmmm, still waiting for the bassline...
Ah, there it is. It has a nice sound, but it doesn't sound strong or anything. Neither do your drums acually...
Dunno, found thisone to be rather boring and unintresting...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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14-07-2005 09:27 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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LCD influenced sweeps intro..
Very weird track ==> blip blip, toot toot 
I like/encourage the enthousiasm with which lotsof tracks on this site are posted, BUT either it sounds like they're makeing their last tune ever and consequently try to PACK it with sounds and variations... go easy on the ideas, but make sure they sound GOOD.
Oh, and go and look for some decent sounding samples, VERY important.
Anyway, seems like you were having fun making this track 
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my tunes
"I'm not under the alkafluence of inkahol that some thinkle peep I am.
It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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14-07-2005 12:59 |
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personally i like definition in my tunes.i like things to be ruff sounding but with a clarity....and i agree with soi its packed with sounds....which unless your really good at eq-ing will make it sound messy...
and the arrangement needs work imo........
yeh i think soi hit it oon the heas with looking for decent sounding samples
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16-07-2005 21:24 |
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but i'll put the full version on my site tomorrow i''l pass the link thru then 
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