15mb!!!! go easy on the conversion man......if it did turn out that someone wanted your tune to sign and they realise that youve been giving it away at this sort of bit rate then their not gonna want it no more........cause everyone will already have it!!
and ok i dont know because i dont look at every tune.......but have you done much reviewing?? if not it could be why......anyway aboout the track........
to much distortion/bass at the intro.....dont like the panning......man the mix is really messy...the beats are way to quiet......and the bass is way to loud....not really feeling your choice of bass sound.....
sorry to be harsh.....no dont give up!!!
reminds me of some of my early tracks......my best advice is.....listen to lots and lots of dnb in the style your looking to create.....note the structure/composition and the way they use atmospheres to make the bass seem heavier when it comes in....
and for a little while at least...rip them off ....copy them...or at least try to...youll gain an insight into lots of things.......
Oh boy, is this track awfully overcompressed or what?
Read these three rules a few times and NEVER forget them, ever again:
- IF you add compression on the final track (which isn't needed to start with, do every track on its own!) then GO EASY and don't use high ratios!
- IF you add compression on the final track (which isn't needed to start with, do every track on its own!) then GO EASY and don't use high ratios!!
- IF you add compression on the final track (which isn't needed to start with, do every track on its own!) then GO EASY and don't use high ratios!!!
I think there might be some good ideas in thisone, but the compression is SO awfull I couldn't make myself listen to it good enough. Everything gets puched away by a lot of other shit...
Sounded quite repetetive to me...
Oh yeah, I didn't hear the LOT of bass, in fact, most of the basslines sounded rather thin...
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
Ideas are nice, but sounds (eq, compression, mastering, whateverà sounds indeed awful.
Damn weird track, if you ask me.
Redo the whole compression thing, even try to delete ALL compression, only use it when highly necessary.
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It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
mad intro, atmospheric, lots and i mean lots of bass!!! (can't complain this is DnB after all!) think you could fill it up a bit more with some synths or fx, sounds a bit empty at times and the momentum gets lost a feel - need to keep that going somehow. Played at a rave would go down well, but not quite as enjoyable listening to it in the car or at home if you know what i mean. I feel that there is a lack of structure on this one, you need to come up with a catchy riff - a lead of some sort to give this tune a more accomplished feel. The drums i think are ok, some nice variations.
