Tonedef 
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Registration Date: 05-07-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Panic' and post your comments here!!!
this track is a bit different... just trying to see how versatile i can be...
enjoy... and please leave some reviews when your done... your tips are important to me developing as a dnb artist...
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09-07-2005 04:16 |
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baz
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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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nice work man love the synths 
i'm not into the disorted air-travelling at 3:42
your bassline's fat
drumz is done verry well but a bit none-variating
(but you really rocked the synth ...damn the shits fat 
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nice work rate it 8
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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09-07-2005 11:19 |
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cynik
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Registration Date: 15-03-2005
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I can see where youre going with this, but it's the sound quality that ruins itr for me.
say experimentation? with some things better not experiment.this sounds all too distant- it seems there is no mid-range frquencies. like you passed this through a strong eq-curve once it was rendered. and maybe you overcompressed after that, the kik and bass overpowers
drop has no power too, the snare is too thin as is the kik. bass is good however. other sounds are somehow small 
structure-wise pretty weird stuff imo.. but it gets better after that 'pause' in 4:40, again drops with no power. its too long too
what I liked is the bassline tho nothing special, the rhythm in the intro is interesting with that little panned click sound...
not too bad, but still a long way to go my friend... you have some nice ideas, but check the production forum to get guidance on execution techniques..
cheers
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09-07-2005 17:47 |
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teknyne
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Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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ez! like the dark moaning noises in the intro, scary shit. bass is cool but could do with more variation, has a wicked driving feel too it tho. like the synths that come in at around 3:00 feel they could still do with work to make them fit better with the bass. 2nd drop sounds really cool, feelin this! aint really my style but its smart. Reckon the kick drum could do with soundin a bit more powerful at the drops so its like BOOM! when it kicks in. cool stuff just needs a bit more variation 7/10
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10-07-2005 23:42 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is allright, not great
Drop: wow, sweet snap on that snare! Very nice. Kick could use some more oempf though. Bassline isn't too impressive...
The fucked up shit with that sampled loop... dunno man, kinda stinks...
Acually, apart from the lovely high end on the snare, this track has little going for it imo. Didn't find the sounds or melodies intresting at all...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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15-07-2005 15:25 |
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HEXO
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Registration Date: 13-07-2005
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hot track recommended to every head.... fo real
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16-07-2005 11:06 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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finally a song that i can cook eggs too. there's a odd stero clikcing with the kick ont he drums at 1:00.
yes, dub basslines, i miss that sound, no one ever uses it. i guess we can say this is a dancefloor song because it repeates itself forever.
ehrn yourepeat this much thoes small changes mean a lot and can even make different sections of songs when even one new element is added. and best of you can change to something completly radical and it doesn't seem weird at all, but needed.
the strings section at 4:00 is so nice, i love chords like that, strong romantic strings, but not happy, the romantic chords are usually kinda dark.but such a clean drom at 4:50 there's no grit grime gunk or dirt. that sounds weird.
no passion or emotion. even just a strong distortied stab to give a beat or rhthem would be good, evne if it was quit int eh mix.
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