This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by anf0 D: 06-07-2005 01:33.
05-07-2005 10:15
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i like the pattern at the start....although the beats that come in are a bit to jungle for my taste.....nice short breakdown.......good drop.but wheres the sub?? theres lots of lead but no sub....you need to later some under that lead......
yeh i like this.....but it needs some work...maybe another layer of more percussive beats when it drops....and some sub....its very bright/harsh sounding.....a little cold.....maybe boost the kick a little....
I'll start by saying some really nice sounds you got there. I would filter some of those delayed hit's throughout the track. Dam that is hard-ass sounding drum's, well done. The track is a bit edgy sounding some soft deep sub's would be a nice touch. Anyway dude one hell of a track indeed. Cheers. ++Stu Maggoo++
like the low sounds plus some good sfx in there..... like the changearound in the middle thats ace! but the beat dont work for me, yet i know a number people who would love this track..
nice work
Intro is fine. Nothing special, but decent enuf. Nice dark mood to it.
Drop: nice one. Like the bassline and how it's chopped. If only the drums were phatter! I suggest layering a tramen under it or something.
Having wome more totally fucked up edits would be nice
Second drop: your melodies sound a bit like the real phat drop is still to come, but it doesn't come. I guess having a part where there is more flow would help.
Nice one, but apart from the kick kicking nice and the bassline sounding quite good, the sound needs quite some work, and the drums are defo in need of some layering to spice them up!
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
intro starts good but those hats could fade in. Nice drums again AnfO , cool buidup.
Shit that bassline is so lovely distorted (still better than mine) tell me yo secret. Maybe a sub to fill up the low freq. ?
2nd drop is as massive as the first too !
I like the dark/hard AnfO styly fo shure.
thanx guys for the helpful comments... might spend some more time on this one... or might just go onto the next idea... im thinking i should try and put more then 5-6 hrs intro a tune. try putting a couple of weeks into a tune.
anyhoo glad you fools liked it... obviously someone didnt like and didnt bother to tell me, just voted.
cheers cunt
Nice track overall dude....
Like the hat/snares (whateva they are ) at the start + the dark pad in the background creates a nice atmosphere.
Bassline is nice --> u need to whack some subs in there
the kick drums is to be turned into more of a thump ( that pow noise u here when i kicks in, cant really explain it very well)
intro is alright
could use some filtering on the drums and shit.
maybe some more perc elements, to fill it out n get it rollin.
sub basses are tough... could have some more n changes ups.
overall not too bad, quite enjoyd it.
8/10
