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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Please check out my new track 'Human Traffic (SuRoRa VIP) preview' and post your comments here!!!
Something ecks put together as a jump up track..kind of continueing what kush put together about a year ago...Just a preview so fra, with some tech/darkstep madness...bit of the 00-01 flava...check it out...
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05-07-2005 03:08 |
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very clean....
atmos could do with something similar an octave higher.....that lead needs reeling in a little.....
maybe some more industrial heavy reverbed sounds in the backround on the intro....like it though...but it does sound like your trying to push that lead a bit much..
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05-07-2005 03:21 |
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Surora23
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push....like squeeze it in too much? im little lost...elaborate so i could possibly touch it up 
cheers man...
you and surya are the only ones i lsiten to anymore...
big ups
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05-07-2005 05:15 |
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it sounds like youve tried to emphasise the lead to much......its a little to harsh sounding.....you could drop the level in the mix but im not sure if would work.....did you use distortion of some kind.....if so drop it off a little.....or if you have the distortion on the same channel as your sound, try using it on a send so you can mix the signal.
it also sounds like some of your sounds are fighting each other in the mix a little....its not that bad but it could be why i dont like the lead....,so maybe mix it again..i know its a chore but......
anyway its just my opinion anyway.
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05-07-2005 14:27 |
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Surora23
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lol chore no...just like to knwo ahead of time what i should mix down
..i try to do it while i make the tune...but if ilook past something its usually something you or surya notice...cheers man...will look into further when i continue to work on it..
cheers
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05-07-2005 17:33 |
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05-07-2005 18:51 |
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Greyone
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good equlised , everythings sounds so clear . Because allmost everything is good , i'll tell u some beautidefaults 'schoonheidsfoutjes'.
Drop the atmosphere before the drop cause the drop sounds very unexpected (make the peacefull atmosphere darker by making a low end) imo. Maybe a decent buildup? Drums sounds realy good but i should at some rims/rides to fill up.
Very cool preview.
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05-07-2005 18:56 |
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05-07-2005 23:23 |
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wicked whip sample!!
good track... i like the low bass and synth combination off the beat
quite funky in places + nice effects to the tune adds a lot to your track. looking forward to the finished mix
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06-07-2005 00:22 |
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Surora23
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glad you guys are liking it so far...wasnt sure whether ot not to continue it, but im sure i will now...keep em coming guys
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06-07-2005 04:57 |
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Surya
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Drums: well, not going to say more than that they're clearly made by you 
That bassline has been used quite a few times before (by Dave Akuma eg) but it's used nice.
Sub kicks nicely, but it seems to clip slightly...
A bit short, no
Not bad!
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06-07-2005 10:10 |
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Surora23
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keep em coming...would love to make this one jsut right so teh labels will like
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07-07-2005 05:55 |
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the drums are standardly good what I learned to expect from you
and the unavoidable reverse cymbal, or is it a crash this time around
ah, nice pads, bring the atmosphere to a proper level
that lead is great! Imo drop after the vocal works good too when the new bass sounds enter.
the rest of the tune could use some kind of a change, a new synth or whatever, to prevent these parts becoming boring
overall it sounds pretty good so far
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08-07-2005 19:37 |
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Darkside
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(the comments in this review correspond to the mp3 you personally sent me, assuming the two files are the same)
pads for the atmo seem a little too faint, but they're good
the whip sample just don't fit. cool, but it doesnt work. save it for a lighter track.
like munki said earlier, the levels are a bit shifty later on when it gets pretty hard, and you can hear a kind of grittiness... try taking out some frequencies on sounds where you don't need them, and i don't mean only the cut at 20hz and 18khz thing...
drums...like everyone else said, basic, full and firm surora breaks
nice first bassline you put in there, i really like the sound.
the one in after the drop that goes side by side with it is good as well
nice reversed break at the end of the measures. fits well enough.
and of course the nordish filtered sampled bassline sound is definitely cool.
this is pretty nice work tho...if you can do this with fruity...feel no need to upgrade.
8/10
you still listen to my reviews, right? 
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09-07-2005 04:08 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by Darkside
(the comments in this review correspond to the mp3 you personally sent me, assuming the two files are the same)
pads for the atmo seem a little too faint, but they're good
the whip sample just don't fit. cool, but it doesnt work. save it for a lighter track.
like munki said earlier, the levels are a bit shifty later on when it gets pretty hard, and you can hear a kind of grittiness... try taking out some frequencies on sounds where you don't need them, and i don't mean only the cut at 20hz and 18khz thing...
drums...like everyone else said, basic, full and firm surora breaks
nice first bassline you put in there, i really like the sound.
the one in after the drop that goes side by side with it is good as well
nice reversed break at the end of the measures. fits well enough.
and of course the nordish filtered sampled bassline sound is definitely cool.
this is pretty nice work tho...if you can do this with fruity...feel no need to upgrade.
8/10
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of course i do...lol...a lot of the previous posts are due to a very large amoutn of impatience... I listen and read everyones reviews...and take every bit they have to say into consideration...i just happen to not mention you... (on purpose so you continue to be a bystandard and nothing bad is brought upon you because of a comment, whether good or bad has been made towards you 
cheers though...yea its coming long...still adding new stuff here and there...etc... cheers for the reviews eveyrone...PLease keep em coming...
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09-07-2005 04:52 |
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I cant say much that hasnt been said so just likin it.
just feel that if u added a couple of switches in the track it would stand out more. but its my style and deserves 10/10
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09-07-2005 13:01 |
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This is real nice.
The layereing in the drums works really nicely. I think the whip sound works well but could do with a little more volume just to bring it through a little more, maybe a bit of Overdrive to make it a little more aggresive.
The bass sound is good, only listening on small speakers today(Heavy night last night) so I cant be sure about the sub mix, but the body of the bass was nice and clear.
A couple things im not sure about. the fast snare breaks are cool but get a bit repetitive. Maybe just every 4/8 bars.
Just listened again, thought it be cool if you put some reverb on the end of the first whip sample. I reakon it might work nicely with a really long decay and a HP filter to sweep it away as the tune carries on.
I also felt that the kick could be a little more punchy but this could be down to my monitors again. But it sounded a little muddy with the bass.
One other thing was that the atmos is real nice but offers a different vibe to the main tune. They work nicely together but I think you should save combining them till later in the song. Alow them to show there full and different personalities before combining them into one twisted, schizophonic beast of a tune.
This a cool tune and I dont understand the low rating it has. Id give it an 8, but ill rate it 10 because its much better than the rating suggests. (Push the average up a bit) especially considering the praise in the other reveiws.
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12-07-2005 19:08 |
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Holy shit man! 
Nice indeed. This track's a monster, cheers for the preview but hope to hear a full version in zee near future man for this track is a beast in the making. Everything sounded really good on my speakers, great production. Keep it up man your allready there. 
