 Razorcut - Molten Ram  |
Razorcut
Producer
Registration Date: 04-08-2004
Posts: 19
 |
|
Please check out my new track 'Molten Ram' and post your comments here!!! Be so kind to give me an honest review.
Put it up loud!
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Razorcut: 04-07-2005 19:12.
|
|
|
04-07-2005 17:45 |
|
|
Zokkel 
Newbie
Registration Date: 05-07-2005
Posts: 1
|
|
jupse,
razorcut, heavy name
and the name 'molten ram', sounds a lot like a variation of 'Ram Trilogy - molten beats'
but now, the song...
there is to few variation in your bassline, try to do something more with it. and you have to get rid of the reversed crash cymbal, you use it way to much.
I do like your add-ons of your drum-line. and there is some funky stuff that sounds good.
there is some good stuff in it, but you have to do more with it.
however, my sister said that it wasn't that special
twas ma geweuntjes, gelik damme zegn int westvlams
keep working on it, maybe someday you create a worldhit ;-)
greetzzz
__
Zokkelman on the d'n'b arena
|
|
|
05-07-2005 13:20 |
|
|
Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
Not too fond of that saw in the intro, but I like how it starts building up to the drop.
Although quite nicely produced, the track doesn't grab attention. There doesn't seem to be a part by which to recognise the track or anything...
__
"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
|
|
|
06-07-2005 10:20 |
|
|
Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
Posts: 6,285
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
euh...ok
first the saw isn't that great , should take an other sound instead.
Drums sounds allright for a beginning producer but needs a lot of work.
There are some good ideas in it but you just have to clean the sounds (eq.) and maybe layers yo drums.
|
|
|
06-07-2005 10:31 |
|
|
LJ Fontain
Producer
Registration Date: 20-03-2008
Posts: 6
|
|
|
Like the intro and the break but not really feeling the drop
|
|
|
29-03-2008 12:45 |
|
|
|
