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some good stuff in there bud
dont think theres enough in it tho but as its the early stages thats understandable
the beat around 2:37 dont really work for me needs to be changed i think.
I like the hi synth sounds you got goin on in there but here's a thought..
youv'e changed the melody round alot in this tune... why not pick out your best bit... and build on that by adding lower synths in the same pattern and a few off the beat details... i believe would make tune loads better... but thats only my opinion bud
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07-07-2005 08:48 |
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interesting tune...definately more cohesion than that the last one i heard.
i think its a slight stretch of the imagination to call this drumnbass, its far closer to old school rave tunes. that cheesey bendy rave synth and the interludes of 4/4 thumping kick drums, could not be mistaken for a 'sweet break'.
That said, its not a bad effort at all. the tune is nicely in key (god forbid) and the drum edits were far and above those on 'butterfly breakzZz'
The intro was a little bit skatty, the last kick in the bar straight after the snare throws the whole beat into a bit of a mess. and as i said before, u really need to play with the velocities on your hi-hats otherwise they will always have that awkward ridigity.
It sounds like youve taken a fair few samples from other tunes, which is no bad thing. (The synth sounds like a VERY WELL KNOWN DNB tune)But if youre going to use samples try to either edit them so they arent recognisable, or take them from more obscure tunes.
All in all, not a bad tune at all. There are some good ideas which you should dwell on for a bit rather than switching all over the place.
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07-07-2005 12:54 |
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PassDa J.
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Nice shit baz, I must say this song is the best so far ... maybe the 'hardcore-part' is a bit too long ... make it shorter because it doesn't really sound like dnb at a certain time ... 
( the baz-way )
Freaky intro dude I listened to this when I was high and smokin' a fat bitchnigga ... mmm tis van Pascal ... lekkerrrrrrrrr 
Nuja, to the point .. I like the jumpy part, must sound great int the Misubishi Lancer dude real funky ... uh uh uh YEAH
Don't you laugh with my deceas, it's a terrible thing to live like me ... YEAH
Like the incoming sound at 2:20 ... nice, but it's a litlle offbeat at a certain point .. when it comes up to be exactly ... 3:00 nice change dude ...
Nice hihats real kick in the nuts feeling ... 
Yeah Yeah ...
9/10 
C ya tmorow in MEDIBEG where the rubber flows ... 
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07-07-2005 23:23 |
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Originally posted by TechDiff
It sounds like youve taken a fair few samples from other tunes, which is no bad thing. (The synth sounds like a VERY WELL KNOWN DNB tune)But if youre going to use samples try to either edit them so they arent recognisable, or take them from more obscure tunes.
All in all, not a bad tune at all. There are some good ideas which you should dwell on for a bit rather than switching all over the place. |
thx for the advice 
(btw the only thing i used that wasn't mine was breakbeats i realy don't know what song your talking bout indulge me!!) but it al came from the mind ya know)
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08-07-2005 13:28 |
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TechDiff
Hetty Jakes Pretentious Cheese Wog
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Really!, Honestly!!, Truethfuly!!!?.
If you say so. What software are you using. I'd take a guess at fruity but whatever. And what synths are you using, especially for the intro synth?
Im sorry to be suspicios but I cant help it. But if you have programmed the synths yourself then good on you.Really nice sounds,but
you know exactly what tune I mean, Dont play the innocent.
Its not like youll get banned for using the occasional sample.
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08-07-2005 13:44 |
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PassDa J.
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He doesn't know dude ...
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08-07-2005 16:28 |
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I lidked some parts of the beat, however not all. Your melody was too 'high' for me, but that's a personal flavour. There is too little bass, and too many high notes. Keep it on!
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08-07-2005 17:39 |
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baz
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09-07-2005 11:07 |
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PassDa J.
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Yeah dude chill out, just who the hell do you think you are ... Mr. Bigshot ???
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09-07-2005 11:43 |
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LIGHTER IN THE AIR. WHO WANTS A REWIND....
man this sound takes me back a few years. its sounds ruff but thats the
point....i feel its dont sit together but thats also 1 of its strong points .like in the day u never knew what was going to happen next, all it really needs is a speeded up female drop with some lush old skool pad..enjoyed it 4/5
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09-07-2005 12:26 |
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baz
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thx
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09-07-2005 16:52 |
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TechDiff
Hetty Jakes Pretentious Cheese Wog
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Ok, Im sorry. I must have been mistaken. I didnt meen to sound arrogant or whatever, but Ive had a shitty few days and thats how it came out. I appologize for venting my anger towards you.
Somewhere along the line some wires got crossed and it was enough to trigger me.
However, I am giving my honest opinions, and Im sorry my opinions caused such a problem. Wrong as I may be, the bass does remind me of Champion sound, (Fair play cause its a nice bass tone) and if you havent heard it then check it out. Cool tune. I think the original bass sample is from the Terminator film.
Either way I apolgize for any offence,
Didnt appreciate the "Bigshot" remark though, But i guess i deserved it.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by TechDiff: 11-07-2005 01:22.
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11-07-2005 01:20 |
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baz
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don't worry bout it
jus' chill
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11-07-2005 17:15 |
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PassDa J.
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Now you really don't need to apologise that much dude ...
It's allright ... Communicating by forums can get a litlle confusing, but really don't be sorry to much dude
It just would have been easier if you just said wich song is was ... Didn't see the problem 
Laterzzz dude
Respect for the beginning drum'n'baser please 
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