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Paki 
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Please check out my new track '2Minutes of Rektum Anger' and post your comments here!!!
Made in Fruity Loops 5.2
Vst used : Novation V-Station, Juno Fx+ standard synths in Fruity loops
Mastering as usual in Cubase SX ( sorry about the compression but when I noticed the peaks I simply didn`t had the nerves to correct the compression)
Ok so this is just some very short but powerfull track ...
Inspired by the movie " The Great Water"
This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system.
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03-07-2005 12:57 |
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baz
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Registration Date: 19-02-2005
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i like your drumz an all
bassline is ok but could have some more variation an try doin something about that
flanger that kicks in an out startin from 1:00
sounds way to sharp an stops way to sudden an then kicks in again an again.....way to sudden
nice track but really do not like the flanger 
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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03-07-2005 14:24 |
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nice track name........should have called it rectal acid......
drums could do with some more layers.they sound very thin.....more like ghost notes .yiu need a phatter kick n snare with them...
needs a new intro....bass is catchy....but get rid of the duck noise....its doing my head in.....
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04-07-2005 16:56 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Like the FX in the intro, the bass is a little too distorted/muddy for how low it is, I like the way it sounded better on the little 1 bar change and when you used it later again... Got some good ideas, if you made it a little longer I give it an 8 of 10. Cheers. Z
7 of 10 
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Nick & Erina Z
http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493
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05-07-2005 16:01 |
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TechDiff
Hetty Jakes Pretentious Cheese Wog
Registration Date: 14-06-2005
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This is really random.
I quite like the intro noises, I agree with Munki about the drums. Just too week, and not really that interesting either.
Some of the atmospherics are real nice.
This seems like a bit of a non tune, It starts, it goes....,and then it stops.There is no real structure, or anything particularly catchy either, Im not trying to be unfair but I think youd be better off leaving this and starting a fresh idea.
You obviously know what youre doing and as such I feel confident about feeling that you can do a lot better.
Sorry for being blunt but this just isnt my cup of tea..
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13-07-2005 19:43 |
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Soi
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Registration Date: 29-01-2003
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Intro? TRy to work on this a bit more, now it sounds like a bunch of very short pâtterns thrown together.
Drums are nice (concenring editing and stuff) but too low on volume.
Basssounds (especially the fast/driving one) could use at least some variation or slight filterchanges (resonance or cut-off)
I love the madness on the cymbals tho.
After a while, the melody gets addictive, but the track itself lacks variety and decent buildups/breakdowns
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"I'm not under the alkafluence of inkahol that some thinkle peep I am.
It's just the drunker I sit here the longer I get."
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14-07-2005 12:47 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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This is one of the best song-titles I've ever seen.
Sounds a bit rough and unfinished.
You should develop this style more, interesting feel to it.
Many cool ideas in here, reminds me of grime in a way.
In Norway we would call this "Breialt" which is a complement when it comes from me.
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Download my album for free/pay what you want http://recordsofthefleshgod.bandcamp.com...years-2002-2005
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20-12-2005 00:58 |
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anf0 D
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Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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