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Halph-Price 
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'fredomt o make a choice' and post your comments here!!!
This song needs some detailed critque. i can't really figure what is wrong with it.
Edit by Surya: New version here
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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30-06-2005 23:45 |
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Greyone
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MC Alien rocks !
This is trippin good man , keep yo style were it stucks.
Just pump up the tempo a bit and for the rest i haven't comment cause i don't know what to say.
Nice drums but the kick is to damn not loud.
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30-06-2005 23:58 |
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Stutterstep
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wicked atmosphere in the intro, I like the voxs too, different but good
Cool hip hop beat i love the drum switch, maybe a bit more volume on the drums or even some distortion.
I would add a really hard amen to this track and a dirty bass line(my opinion) mady were the second break is could add a bit more flavor
cool song just need another verse i think
Respect
stutterstep
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01-07-2005 03:21 |
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thefunke1
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Intro is nice, although woudl loose the voice, focus more on the drums, as it's got a great trip hop beat going on, which you flow very well into the drumnbass drums....
Loose that synth sound at 1:21, actual melody is nice, just the synth used is annoying..
Love the bass, and the drums ... wait there's that synth again.... ok, it's got to go!!!
The idea is there, drop the voice, and that synth, drums are great and really like the bass.
ok, that's my 2 cents, hope it helps, looking forward to hearing a re-worked version.
Take care.
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01-07-2005 20:54 |
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Sykotic
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Ok from the top...I like the weird intro sounds...slow beat is cool especially with the robot talking...but what the hell is it saying?
This track is weird(no surprise...haha). Sounds is not bad. You definately have yer own style. Not realy into the aahhhhh ahhhhh ahhhh ahhh at 2:38. Good overall sound, just strange.
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03-07-2005 03:24 |
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Surya
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Intro is weird but kinda cool 
Downtempo stuff: like the vocoder, not too fond of the bassline...
Drums coming in: that snare ratles a lot, but it's very light. It's too light. Give it more weight.
Again I'm not too fond of the melodies you make. They sound like some notes placed in sequence, they don't seem to go anywhere...
Apart from the cool vocoder, this track has little going for it imo...
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03-07-2005 12:08 |
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Halph-Price
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holy crap there is two of them 
oops ;/
let's say that this one is the old verion, i changed a lot int he second one i posted.
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14-07-2005 06:20 |
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Surya
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New version here
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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