drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » syneptic - Dark Ocean syneptic - Dark Ocean Author Post syneptic Master Producer Registration Date: 11-03-2005 Posts: 517 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Dark Ocean' and post your comments here!!! made this with reason and some samples. i tried to make a dark tune with a smashing break. hope you like it.....it´s not 100 percent finished.... __ www.myspace.com/djsyneptic 27-06-2005 17:35 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  nice vocals in the intro bass sounds too much like a patch/ default, a bit eqing might help to lose the unnecessary frequencies ooh major tension building, eugh, dont like the bass going that high filter-wise break: good idea here, but a galloping amen filtering in would be better IMO breakdown: pretty insane bassline but too static drums. wild edits follow on tho, with the delayed amen - great idea but it's too loud ? yeah, deff drums are way too loud. dunno, some nice ideas you presented but work around those sounds, eq them, work on the levels to give them more presence, those drums drown everything __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 27-06-2005 18:33 syneptic Master Producer Registration Date: 11-03-2005 Posts: 517 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by cynik yeah, deff drums are way too loud. dunno, some nice ideas you presented but work around those sounds, eq them, work on the levels to give them more presence, those drums drown everything had problems with the fx on the amen...have to manage that.... thanks for critics,there´s some work to do __ www.myspace.com/djsyneptic 27-06-2005 20:05 camo Wicked Producer Registration Date: 22-12-2004 Posts: 346 Helpfulness rating:  Yo Syneptic! nice vocal in da intro. bass could be better. drums are cool. search for a punchier bass!! there should be a bit more variations in da intro. and....i know the vocal....ive got it too drop: cool reece. the huh could be louder! but nice thang! wow. theres something going on! a bit too dizzy!!! 2.43: drums muuuchch tooo loud. ok. overall a real killah! im lookin forward to da finished version. cheers. hmmmmm hhmmmm hmmm 7/10 __ keepin it rollin` www.myspace.com/camopdj 27-06-2005 20:11 syneptic Master Producer Registration Date: 11-03-2005 Posts: 517 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by camo and....i know the vocal....ive got it too hm,where does this come from -------hehe,data exchange __ www.myspace.com/djsyneptic 27-06-2005 20:18 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  drop the vocal IMO ... i like everything else although that snth does sound like a straight patch ... try a reverb or distrotion straight on it .. should break up that patch feel ... didnt like the drop at all the rollin amen is a top notch idea for that drop ... i think you have the right idea ... you just have to do something to make it sound not reasoned out ... your kick is to loud on the break ... kinda punched through everything once or twice there ... __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 27-06-2005 21:29 syneptic Master Producer Registration Date: 11-03-2005 Posts: 517 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Arkitekt that snth does sound like a straight patch .. not a straight patch - but i know it sounds a little bit ridicolous - i need more pressure..... __ www.myspace.com/djsyneptic 27-06-2005 22:13 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  scream __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 27-06-2005 22:59 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  Nice track man, some seriously mean bass going on. 3:26>nice drop could be a bit longer. The level's are a bit off on the amens. Love the sounds. Yeah man! that's some seriously angry bass! Nicley done. Cheers. Beast of a track! ++Stu Maggoo++ __ Space 28-06-2005 01:21 Stutterstep Cool Producer Registration Date: 27-01-2005 Posts: 103 Helpfulness rating:  cool intro i would layer the pad or add more pads to fill it up a bit Nice drop sounds awsome, but your amens are off. some have hi end and some don't ,,, you can tell when it switches try using to tracks and only fx one of them. it might help with the presence of your drums If you fix that theres not much else to say. wicked track respect Stutterstep 28-06-2005 05:37 syneptic Master Producer Registration Date: 11-03-2005 Posts: 517 Helpfulness rating:  thanks,finished version coming soon (hopefully.....) __ www.myspace.com/djsyneptic 29-06-2005 15:00 Ketz Thinking outside the box... Registration Date: 10-10-2007 Posts: 2,865 Helpfulness rating:  not a big fan of the intro, it gets better when the bass kicks in. i think that you could do with some of the fx samples (eg that klang sounding sample needs some reverb and delay on it so it sounds more natural, kinda seems outta place at the mo). i think you lose the direction of the tune abit as it progresses, could do with more of a common bassline melody. definately sounds hard and dark - i'll give you that __ 06-04-2008 12:43 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » syneptic - Dark Ocean