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anf0 D
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Surya
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Intro is very cool
Drums sound a bit thin
Bassline is cool, but way to messy... Clean it up a bit!
Not a bad start though, could become a really nice dark smasher!
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24-06-2005 08:17 |
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anf0 D
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thanx guys for comments n effort put in...
ummm how can i make my drums NOT thin Surya?
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24-06-2005 10:41 |
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Victom#1
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What the hell happened at the end? Add an outro and that shit is ready for wax...
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24-06-2005 11:36 |
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Surya
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ummm how can i make my drums NOT thin Surya? |
Make sure they have a wide frequency scope.
- Kick should have enough low end (duh) and some mid
- Snare should have some low mid for the punch, mid for the smash, and high not to sound lofi. Layer different snares to get this effect if needed
- Use hats and rides that sound crisp but are not too high. They should full up the top part where the snare doesn't reach (or not much).
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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24-06-2005 11:53 |
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anf0 D
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cool...
so i just need to boost the freqs a lil....
do u think any compression would help with the kick n snare?
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24-06-2005 12:02 |
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Surya
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You can't make sound phatter with compression, you can only adjust the dynamics, like attack and stuff
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24-06-2005 13:28 |
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it's heavy and i like it. This track is absolutely the bomb, and I would put it in my dj set without hesitation. But i would change the outro.
9/10
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24-06-2005 15:32 |
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cynik
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intro works well with the rest
do something about the drums, sound selction is good but they need more layers, as to avoid them sounding lo-fi, try adding an exact sequenced drumline with snares on higher frequencies
bassline is cool, really dark atmosphere rolled by the drums
not much in it, but, so far so good
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25-06-2005 10:00 |
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anf0 D
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25-06-2005 11:31 |
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This is again a great track from you Anfo D , dark sounds 'n smashing drums. Alldough the drums sound a bit dry , but they still sound dirty enough for me
. I like the way you distorted that bass ! Just ad an outro to it to complete this party kicker
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25-06-2005 11:58 |
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Aah Haa! Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you, Happy birthday dear aaaaaannnnffooo DDDDDdd HAAPY BIRTHDAY to youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! How cheesy is that son!!!!!++Stu Maggoo++
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29-06-2005 10:15 |
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Greyone
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an fO D ha PPy birT hddddddd aaYY !!!
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29-06-2005 10:48 |
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anf0 D
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29-06-2005 15:22 |
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synth part gives a nice dark atmosphere.
the only thing that seems to bring this track down is that snare.
really took the edge off the tune. try using one of the classic 909 snares with some distortion to trash it up a bit. definately needs a whiter snare sound. rather than the thin cracky sounding one. also play with the velocity of the ghost rolls a bit they are a little lifeless at the moment.
the bassline has a good tone nice n dirty. seems to get a little muddy with the kick drum in places.
the track needs some work on the arrangement. dives straight in with the synth and the drums. synth sounds evil but it doesnt develope. then as soon as the bass comes in the track steps up a gear briefly but doesnt seem to have anywhere left to go.
perhaps put the synth into a lowpass filter and sweep it in gradually so its not so grainy to begin with.
sorry if this a little harsh but thats my thoughts.
fundementally sort that snare and this track is a winner.
good solid tune, well done
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30-06-2005 01:56 |
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anf0 D
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thanx mate... not harsh at all...
everyone has their opinions... yours are just helpful.
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30-06-2005 08:09 |
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Nice, it has all the elements I look for in a Hardstep angry track! I would drop it!
Maybe a little bit of a longer intro with out a beat and outro as well. All else is nice! Z
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