 dubcupboard - Cum N Get It/Tweaked Preview 2 |
dubcupboard 
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Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Cum N Get It/Tweaked Preview 2 ' and post your comments here!!!
I Know I haven't Finished This One
But I Really Wanna Push The Boat Out!
Im A Pain I Know Bit I Gotta Get This One Bang On
Coz I Wanna Aim High People
You Know The Score!
Let Me Know If Thers Still Room 4 Improvement
Or If Im Hittin' The mark.
Massive Big UPZ To All The Crew That Lent Me Their Earz
Last Time round - You Know Who U R!
This Onez All Yourz Baby!!!
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24-06-2005 05:33 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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HOT-DOG!!! That raw bass you added alongside the filtered chord hit's in the intro is sent by the god's! A perfect marriage of sound's indeed! The filtered chord hit section of your track was longer on the previous version no? Why the change up? Anyway you really have something good going with that portion of your track, maybe just bring the bass in on it's own for 4 loops with some mad sampled sound deep in the background for the second two loops of the 4 loops and I don't mean the bass all on it's own, just the way you had it drums and all, just without the chord hit's. Then bring those filtered hitz in the way you had them structured on the previouse version. At 00:44 another sweet chord progression. It's hard to say but I think 00:44 progression could be a bit lowder. It soundz so dam good man, I would be carefull. The twin tube compressor you asked about would come in handy for warming the 00:44 progression up. As Surya noted, a compressor itself will only change dynamic's but a hardware twin tube compressor will add a warmer sound, that's what the tube's do. It takes a few minutes for the tubes themselves to warm up before using. Now back to the track, at 2:30-2:33 you jump up a note, keep that theme throughout the track like at 00:44. It soundz nice and raw. 1:50> the hit's in the background need some punch. Add a sub or a deep kick to this section. Anyway dude I hope this all makes sense. Stick to the structure in the previous version in regard's to how long the filtered chord hitz last. Once again that bass at the beginning is mad skillz indeed. Cheers++Stu Maggoo++ 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 26-06-2005 01:24.
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25-06-2005 06:05 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Ah, sound on thisone is better man
Still lacks punch...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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25-06-2005 10:53 |
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Zippy
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Registration Date: 18-06-2005
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the intro bass could do with being louder cos its good. nice vocal usage and pads too.
its a bit of a shock when that bassline comes in before the drop - the tune was all so pleasant before hand and then it went dirty.
not sure about your excessive use of 'Z's instead of 'S's or using capital letters at the start of your words either.
"Massive Big UPZ To All The Crew That Lent Me Their Earz
Last Time round - You Know Who U R!
This Onez All Yourz Baby!!!"
surely it takes longer to write like that???
9/10 tune tho. maybe try a tune based on that intro bass, it would be a roller.
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Zed Eye Pee Pee Why?
I come with no knowledge of music production, just an ear for dredd.
RINSE IT OUT!
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26-06-2005 22:36 |
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dNk
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Registration Date: 29-02-2004
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listening
intro is interesting , nice sounds , but drums sounds bad , need to clean it up
nice vocals , but again drums sounds bad man listen carrefull
but i love arragment , very nice
i know this all voc samples 
)) so i tired of them but its my personal opinion , a little work with drop could be lovle some craches will be nice
main part is nice but use EQ man it sound like in the tube 
but idea is pretty nice
waiting new works from ya cheers
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26-06-2005 23:05 |
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Greyone
Master Producer
Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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In contrast with DNK i like your drums and the overall sounds very good.
Watch out on 2:06 for that high freq. hat , maybe volume it down a bit.
This sounds really nice , just ad some mo fx and an outro when finished. 7/10
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27-06-2005 09:20 |
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