drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Arkitekt - Phasw 1 (Clip 25% Finished??) Arkitekt - Phasw 1 (Clip 25% Finished??) Author Post Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Phasw 1 (Clip 25% Finished??) ' and post your comments here!!! Been workin on this track steadily for a coupl of days and wanted to see if anyone was feelin it. Criticism is welcome but make sure its constructive, thanks ppl aight then ez This track has been deleted because a new version is available __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 23-06-2005 11:37 baz 7 Registration Date: 19-02-2005 Posts: 1,531 Helpfulness rating:  ok here i go, intro is too sudden try getting something to back it all up (like the trippy synth you use later up ) nice thing goin on with those breakz there it gives the track power filtering is neede here and there but it's 25% finished so who cares altogether i'd say i'm looking forward for the full version of this one __ "shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw" 23-06-2005 21:43 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  thanks for the review mate... i shouldnt say 25% finished its more like 7 percent finished... cause there is stil some filtering and eqing i have to play around with and maybe a bass line change i dont know yet... but i take all your advice under consideration and will mos def be bringin the final this way... at least you liked it ... ez bro __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 23-06-2005 22:17 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  those filtered voices remind me of the alien movies - atmos in there argh, that bubbling synth is ruining it for me, I'd loose it cool bassline sound, but yes, vary it so it doesnt drone around wild edits on the drums but as you said, need refining levels are fucked up a bit, but I guess youll be fixing that also, also Ive noticed some over-distorted parts here and there? on 00:33 when the bassy kick pumps in and after.. structure is nonexistant, so no comments on that I feel the vibe here, so fix those and make a track __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 24-06-2005 00:15 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  I think there is a little bit of structure.. but it IS only 1.30 long ... so give a bit.. i had been told abou the distortion in the the opening .... so i will try to take care of it and see if i can figure out what the problem is... thanks for your input though i appreciate it ... __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 24-06-2005 00:29 cynik Cp6uja Registration Date: 15-03-2005 Posts: 5,646 Helpfulness rating:  doesnt deserve a 4/10 average imo so.. rate: 7/10 __ https://soundcloud.com/tsai-vidro-voves 24-06-2005 09:54 Sykotic Cool Producer Registration Date: 12-05-2005 Posts: 202 Helpfulness rating:  In my opinion you should have held off with this preview. Track sounds like it will be good, really nice beats. But we don't really need this little 25% preview, I would have been more impressed to hear a 80% preview without ever hearing this little clip. Anyway, I'll hit ya up with a better review when you post something a little closer to being finished. __ 24-06-2005 19:06 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  how did that Mortal Kombat sample go on the first cd??? oh yeah And now for a taster of things to come... :bigthumb: will have something more postable soon maybe? __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 24-06-2005 21:58 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Good basis for a dark amen smasher. You've got some nice ideas and edits in there, but it's a bit early to judge. What I can say is that the sound is bad. The EQing needs mucho work... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 25-06-2005 10:47 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  yeah this is my first go around with 3.0 so its just gonna get better for herer (hopefully) thanks for the review regardless... ez bro __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 25-06-2005 14:46 equipped tired Registration Date: 20-05-2005 Posts: 3,818 Helpfulness rating:  That's what Im talking about, big rumbling beast of a track! Surprised I didn't already review your track. Those vocal sample's are seriously mashed ! Well done. Love the the way you bring thing's in on an off beat here and there, give's the whole track a nice felling of aggresivness! Not a compliant. Nicley done!++Stu Maggoo++ __ Space 08-07-2005 17:32 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks mate, the whole track has since that posting been reworked with a new b-line-s, and synth work. should be posted up sometime this afternoon... ez krew and tahnks for the review mate ... __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 11-07-2005 11:40 RikkiB Newbie Registration Date: 11-07-2005 Posts: 8 yes the intro is too sudden deff need sumin too bk it up but i am feelin the rest of the tune the breaks are wkd and i also like that bassline __ DJ RIKKI B LIVE IN THE MIX!!! ON WWW.UKBASSRADIO.COM EVERY WEDNESDAY 5pm-7pm gmt DRUM'N'BASS/ JUNGLE 24/7 WE PLAY ARCHIVED SHOWS WHEN WE ARE NOT LIVE 11-07-2005 15:33 Arkitekt Brain Fried Amen Bastard Registration Date: 13-06-2005 Posts: 1,028 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by RikkiB yes the intro is too sudden deff need sumin too bk it up but i am feelin the rest of the tune the breaks are wkd and i also like that bassline Thank you, mang this is 2 reviews in one day amazing... new upload today campers (maybe) or at least sometime this week... ez ppl __ VIRB DARKLAND144 DARKLAND115 11-07-2005 18:40 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Arkitekt - Phasw 1 (Clip 25% Finished??)