Greyone 
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Please check out my new track 'Paranoia' and post your comments here!!!
some new greyone-stuff , just check it...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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22-06-2005 19:04 |
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baz
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nice electro/breakbeat touch you got goin on this one
i realy like what you did with that disorted bass to
you got the cuttin going on like a madman that's ok
the only thing i dislike about it is the outro ,it's too sudden an way too short
anywayz, this is a track wich will defenitly get a spot in my car's cd rack
nice going 
and looking forward to hear more releases like this in the future 
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"shotgun ; slammin in yo chestpiece ; blaw"
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22-06-2005 22:48 |
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S.O.T.A.
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What's up sorry i have dial up took a while to get your track. Those beats are sick! WHOAA that's the shit I would play it. I just don't know about that wwooping sample it kind of dosen't feel right just my opinion. Cool those are chellos comin in right that was a nice transition. I really like he melody in the second break and it's sweet that hardcore bass drum.. You should totally effect that chello in the second break thats really all it's missing. The bassline is nice it feels like it should be louder. Nice work!
LATER
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23-06-2005 01:06 |
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Greyone
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Question: is there any improvement about the soundquality , compared with my older tracks?
Cause now i've totally masterd & rendered it with Fruity instead of an old-time encoder like (nero wave editor shit).
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23-06-2005 10:35 |
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S.O.T.A.
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yeah it does sound better
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23-06-2005 16:56 |
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Arkitekt
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nice atmos ... creepy and creepy always good for the tension ... although i think your drums are little quiet for the type of tune your going for )IMO(
i like the idea behind it although i think that you should bring your drums forward in the mix ... this reminds me of some early 2000 stuff ... very techy feel to it ...
whats the BPM on this??? i think it would be a lot better at a faster speed .....
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23-06-2005 20:20 |
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Greyone
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180bpm , i always keep my tracks on this speed.
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24-06-2005 11:30 |
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Victom#1
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Shit man. This site has more kickass stuff than most pro sites, and your track helps to prove that. Your leads after the breakdown drill more holes in my brain than xtc, and the overall production and structure are top notch. The only thing I can say is pull out the outro a bit to make it more dj friendly, just another phrase of beats will do.
9/10
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24-06-2005 11:48 |
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dj_prophecy
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wow, i realy like this one. It's realy amusing to hear the creapy sounds too. I like it better than mutation.
9/10
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-My God, i'm so bored
*hey...you...wanna get wasted or something?
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24-06-2005 15:20 |
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Sykotic
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This has to be yer best track yet. Your sound has improved greatly. I'm not too fond of some of the voice samples though (scream),I like the idea, just maybe find a diff sample. The "paranoia" one is cool though and the "ubbabubba" is weird but cool. Bass needs to be heavier/louder.
Good job here, keep churnin out the tunes...
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24-06-2005 19:08 |
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Greyone
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Thanx for the reviews guys , I hope my next track will stun y'all down too 
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Laterz...
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24-06-2005 19:35 |
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Moody F
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Like it ,like it, like it!! 
Loud, clear and moving with a certain dread flavour.
This will certainly kick steppaz ass on the dancefloor!
Cello/synths are coming up just where i expected them,
in the very right context.
Nice shift in snare sounds used in several parts of track.
Speed is just as it should be, imo.
4:53 Oww! Why does it already stopped now? Want more!
-This day was already a good one without,
but it's even much better now! Thanx!
Mooooodz up!
Respect!
9/10!
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29-06-2005 15:10 |
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Greyone
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thanx moody , but i know i can do a lot better than that ( don't think im pretencious). I just don't know wish kind of dnb i want to produce , so i'll try it all.
remember...next one is trancestep.
anyway thanx for the replies.
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29-06-2005 15:46 |
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Nick ZZ
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I give it a 10 
I dig the bass/synth, got it layered nicely. Like the breakdown, and the speed added with the fx when it started back up. The strings are pretty suttle, they could come up a little. Like it! Great work. Z
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29-06-2005 19:14 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by greyone
180bpm , i always keep my tracks on this speed. |
Me also... It's a universal DnB tempo... FX can be used to speed it up... Z
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Nick & Erina Z
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29-06-2005 19:17 |
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TechDiff
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This is a cool tune. Tried and tested variation on the typical drumbeats. The little ghost rolls on the kick are nice. Love the vocal samples. Really good mix. Only criticism is the constant tone of the tune, no real variations in it. But it rolls along nicely. I guess its just me but I think my concentration levels have been diminished thanks too excesive drug abuse but I really need a track to keep changing in order for me to be really grabbed by it.
You where saying that you always stick to 180 but youre not sure what kind of DNB you wanna make. I think a good idea would be to try a different bpm. 190-200 is always a laugh if you can stand it.
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29-06-2005 22:00 |
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Surya
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Intro is a bit empty, but allright.
Bass in the intro is nice. As are the drums. Nothing spectacular though.
Drop: Quite nice and clean techy feel. The kickrolls are quite cool.
Your hihats could use some spicing up though...
That pad you add isn't great and neither is its melody.
The concept of that bassline with the drums is quite nice, but not enough to carry an entire track...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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30-06-2005 08:10 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by TechDiff
You where saying that you always stick to 180 but youre not sure what kind of DNB you wanna make. I think a good idea would be to try a different bpm. 190-200 is always a laugh if you can stand it. |
I tried allready 190 once , but some listeners couldn't stand it so...
btw : I'll stick to the 'hard' dnb i think.
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