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Sensa 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 14-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Cryin' and post your comments here!!!
Hello Dnb.be massive! right i know sean paul is quite a well known commerical artist, but this accapella i got off a P2P "royalty free" Server? so if it violates any copyright please just fuck it off 
. Anyway to the tune at hand....I heard some potential Badboy tunes like L.O.V.E and Your mine and felt inspired, i hope it shows
, a completely different style to what im used to but i had a go!
Thanks all
Track removed because of copyright violation
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Re:Voltage Recordings
www.revoltagerecordings.com
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Email: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
MSN: sensa@revoltagerecordings.com
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21-06-2005 20:11 |
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Arkitekt
Brain Fried Amen Bastard
Registration Date: 13-06-2005
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i dont know about no sean paul i dont like him but ill write on the basis that i can ignore his nattering 
i like the synth piano in the intro ... i like the bass and the drum work ... the snare is real poppy though, maybe its just me ...
your drum change ups are real nice keep the very common beat from gettin too boring ...
sean paul ?? i would leave him out next time
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23-06-2005 20:26 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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The trance sound in the intro sounds a bit dry, no?
Gets better indeed.
The vocal is seriously out of key with the melody 
The drums sound lofi, but I guess thats the low bitrate?
Drop: quite nice basslines, but give them some more low-end. Drums are quite mid again, make them a bit phatter!
The tune is a bit boring imo, it relies on the vocals too much. You should make tunes that still stand out if you mute the vocal...
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24-06-2005 08:25 |
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Sykotic
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Registration Date: 12-05-2005
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You know I dig all your tracks! This one is no exception. Good melody, I think you have a talent for making melodys that really stick with you,(like bass line from "Tales...") I can't understand a word that the MC is sayin 'cept for "Auxillaray"... Sounds cool though. Maybe a lil too much dickin around at the start. I think this track has greater potential than what you got goin here. Build it up some more, maybe some heavier drums.
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24-06-2005 19:00 |
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TechDiff
Hetty Jakes Pretentious Cheese Wog
Registration Date: 14-06-2005
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This couldve been so good but there are a few fundamental flaws.
First. Sean Paul is annoying as hell when he's in tune. out of tune is just too much.
Second, the track needs some sort of evolution, at the moment there is no real progression.
I think the drums are really good though, the held back half time beats work really well.
The melody part is good but gets boring because of the lack of change.
This sounds like the bare bones of a tune. The drums are there, the synth is there, and there vocals are there, although out of tune.
However there doesnt seem to be anything else, the ear candy which is needed to keep the listener interested.
I think you got bored or simply couldnt be bothered with this one. With some work it could be really good. I agree with Surya, If you took the vocals out there wouldnt be anything to hold the tune up, and relying on Sean Paul for quality is just wrong!.
Please do more to this tune,it got a lot of potential, even if it means altering the key of everything so its in key with the vocals. The bare bones are good but it needs a lot of fleshing out.
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13-07-2005 16:16 |
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Tonedef
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Registration Date: 05-07-2005
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ye its not my style but its well produced i have to admit... hate saun paul but understand that the sample works in the tune... it needs to be used a little less tho... nice drums and fairly good basslines..
nice one
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18-07-2005 14:39 |
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