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Please check out my new track 'Back Gammon' and post your comments here!!!
Well, here's another unstructured track I realize, but figured since I'm onto something new and this track has a few good parts, I'd post it for comments. Cheers for reviews.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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20-06-2005 02:59 |
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thefunke1
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Alright, seeing as though your already touched the structure I will leave alone, although seems a little bit better somewhat in this track.
The ideas and sounds that you have are great, the guitar in the intro is pretty wicked, then the sub drop is very deep, and rich, nice and full sounds throughtout the track. I think once you get the hand of really putting a tune together in a format the could be mixed properly, you will have some really killer tracks. The highs could be boosted up a bit, or mabey the sub is a little overpowering, not really sure. Like the work on the effects, very nice in parts.
Anyway, nice track pretty cool to listen too. Love some of the sounds, and drums, very nice!!
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20-06-2005 03:52 |
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Stutterstep
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I really like the intro, Made make it a little longer.
This song has a nice old school feel to it. I dont think there is any real problem with the stucture
I think the mix needs some work. Your cant really hear the snare. and your amens seem to far back.
The bass sounds great.nice one, good track
Respect
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20-06-2005 04:27 |
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stickbubbly
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interesting.
you have a cool beat going on there but i think it could use some more cymbals.
intro sounded cool
wicked sounds
i think i hear some congas pop in once and awhile. keep em goin. use them more.
the track does seem too lead me all over ther place and i find myself looking for some kind of identifiable melody.
from a production stand point its good. some cool noises, and it sounds good, but as for the song, it didnt do it for me, im more into the straight forward repetative melodies.
keep it up
cheers.
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20-06-2005 17:44 |
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dNk
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ok , lets start 
intro is very interesting , like this jazzy stuff
the drums are very simple , but if you like dont change it but they sounds really premitive
the whole track is very interesting cause all parts are different hehe
difficult to understand the whole idea of tracks or maybe there no any idea
yeah it sounds good , but listen more different tracks by famous artists cause you need to combine all your parts to get big interesting track
Cheerz
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20-06-2005 20:45 |
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lol. rawwwk.
sounds like pink floyd on the intro.
old skool bass. you need to get the mix between your kick and bass right.......the kick is lost under all the sub....amen needs turning up.
although its quite varied like you said the arrangement needs work....
and whats with the bass at the end.....its kind of free form old skool dnb......not my cup of chi
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21-06-2005 18:28 |
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Arkitekt
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well lets see so far it sounds like pink floyd space music... what happened to the spae music..
your sub is over driven which will give you problems later down the road... your synths and effects arent driven enough which is making for a VERY unbalanced track..
i think the idea behind it is very good ... your change ups are good though and i think that redeems it a bit..
i think you need more elements to the track cause as it stands there isnt much except for the drum changeups..
good work for a first tyme..
ez
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21-06-2005 18:58 |
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i like the space music feel... i want to do that again....
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22-06-2005 07:04 |
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"Cheers for the reviews guy's."
Next track I post on this site will have structure and a fat hook I promise. 
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22-06-2005 22:20 |
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"Cheers for the reviews guy's."
Next track I post on this site will have structure and a fat hook, I promise.
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22-06-2005 22:43 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Hello, whoa funky guitar is that you? Thats different. It was cool how it jumped into the beat . Cool beat. The amen sounds goo0d just kind of strange at first then it's cool. That was a nice fading break sounded really good. It is kind of confusing though as to when it first drops. Don't get me wrong I like the change ups. Definatley interesting. 
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22-06-2005 23:38 |
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Greyone
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I have to sleep , tomorrow I have my oral exam from the endwork (you know) but though I'll review this.
Starts like ...flangerd loop. Breaks are cool. Its like experimental stuff , with the afterpressure on 'mental' (afterpressure='nadruk') . Cool FX on the melo. Drums are nice but bassline is missing. Its more a listen track than a dancefloor track but its nice too hear.
Apreciate mate .
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23-06-2005 00:05 |
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Sykotic
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Nice acid rock intro...is that Pink Floyd? could have used some more of that trippy intro stuff before the beats. Beats are pretty creative, sampled breaks are good too but a little quiet. Track seems to be lacking direction, just kinda all over the place, also lacking substance- if that makes any sense... needs to be thickened up.
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26-06-2005 00:26 |
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syneptic
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the first beat could have more power and the the amen should be a little bit louder and more compressed - more fatness . i like your sounds and ideas, sounds experimentall and it´s an own style....structure needs some work,it´s not a "tune" for me (hope you understand what i mean!) but i love your beat fx´s - so nice !!
keep on kickin´.....
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