drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Paki - Fenomena Paki - Fenomena Author Post Paki Cool Steppa Registration Date: 03-04-2005 Posts: 248 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Fenomena' and post your comments here!!! Ok so this is made in Reason 2.5 and I have been using some vocoders and playing with the reveerb to get the Fx and the bases. I hope you`ll like it... plus sorry about the incompltete mastering but i just havent got the patient This track has been deleted. Reason: Paki has been banned from the site for creating a second identity and trying to cheat the voting system. 18-06-2005 13:00 ptah Newbie Registration Date: 18-06-2005 Posts: 7 Helpfulness rating:  nice filters on the bass. personally i would take out the voices. the effects on the beats make for interesting track. 18-06-2005 13:09 Politix Producer Registration Date: 24-05-2005 Posts: 48 Helpfulness rating:  nice intro. i'd take out the little synths in the background, they crowd the song. Nice strong pulse with good beat fills. nice "techy" feeling about the track (like driving down a futuristic motorway) the vocals are a bit too much and you should try to do a more interesting 2nd drop to increase variety in the song. this track is interesting, it gets a bit repetitive at the end but the loop is nice, the beat as well. nice one Politix 18-06-2005 14:26 broadside mentalist Registration Date: 17-01-2005 Posts: 584 Helpfulness rating:  cheers for my review pal nice opening sounds, very mencaing and cool few structural issues if your going for the completed tune - you need more of an intro, less of a sudden entrance for the beat. but the idea is good. dont see that the vox add anything however. they sound a bit poor, to be fair. you need a more pounding bassline, all you got at the moment is this riff, but you need a boom boom boom staccato sublow line to reinforce it give it more dynamism. have four quick sublows at the end of every two bars or something, actually not entire sublow, it tshould have some higher presence aswell imo. not really enough variation either, try making some breakdowns, vary the riddim a bit more - its a bit too plain. if you ahve a plain rythm, then you have to make it HARD to compensate, ie put a mental snare in, to give the thing some whack. try layering your drums also, and have more sidekicks, bongos and closed high hat play to keep it interesting. but this forms a good basis. kkep it up mate. 18-06-2005 14:56 Darkside Old-School Rolla Registration Date: 02-01-2005 Posts: 620 Helpfulness rating:  intro sounds are pretty cool...but the heavy fx bass just drops out all the sudden...that ain't gonna work. you need to make it flow better. this song has a nice groove. ehh..dont like some of the fx...that one that sounds like a cat or whatever. 18-06-2005 16:29 Darkside Old-School Rolla Registration Date: 02-01-2005 Posts: 620 Helpfulness rating:  intro sounds are pretty cool...but the heavy fx bass just drops out all the sudden...that ain't gonna work. you need to make it flow better. this song has a nice groove. ehh..dont like some of the fx...that one that sounds like a cat or whatever. i dont even notice the bassline that much, and its really minimal melody wise, you need to bring that up a lot. and add changeups.. pretty much stuff everyone else has said. doesnt get too boring, but thats probly because it's a bit short. the beat sounds very nice, professional i think. has a nice groove but...aint as good as it can be yet. 7/10 18-06-2005 16:33 Paki Cool Steppa Registration Date: 03-04-2005 Posts: 248 Helpfulness rating:  Thanks for the awesome review gyes I really apretiateit:-)))) Whatrefers to thebaselineI must justify myself because of the poor mastering I had made on this Tune. Whatrefers to thebeats and thedrums ( espetially snarer) I`,m not sure if you had noticed but thereis some layering of the snares and snare changes. Anyway very helpfull advices and tips about the dynamics of the tune Thanks Ireally apretiate it 18-06-2005 23:27 Darkside Old-School Rolla Registration Date: 02-01-2005 Posts: 620 Helpfulness rating:  oops...i double posted with my review. 19-06-2005 01:55 Zippy Cool Tourist Registration Date: 18-06-2005 Posts: 25 Helpfulness rating:  bring that bass up man! its a good roller, but as has been said, lose the 'cat' sound and those stabs - it makes a good tune sound like it has been made with some bad samples. that drum loop is heavy but does need to vary. get a roll in there at the end of a bar. and get in that sub at the ends too, and go low. GOOD TUNE, poor samples (cat + stab + that 'hello' or beep beep sound) 9/10 __ Zed Eye Pee Pee Why? I come with no knowledge of music production, just an ear for dredd. RINSE IT OUT! 19-06-2005 13:15 @1$-) unregistered very rigid synths......nice rolling beat...could do with more variation rather than the same fill.....and what the fuck is that sound meant to be.... zippy says its a "cat" ...is it dying i would bring in the main synth a bit later......or maybe use a band pass filter and faed the low end in....... you need more bass.....it doesnt sound like its dropped....... i quite liek the beat but the whole thing needs more power.... and you need to drop out that synth at some point......it runs through the whole tune. 19-06-2005 18:03 Stutterstep Cool Producer Registration Date: 27-01-2005 Posts: 103 Helpfulness rating:  Cool track, i like that wave bass . sounds nice and thick The drum sound better then your other tracks. nice, maybe when you mix. bring the other elements down so the drum are a bit more present. I like those reverses you do with the drum good add. It gets a bit repetive maybe switch it up a bit at half way. Nice one Respect Stutterstep 20-06-2005 05:16 S.O.T.A. SHADOW STAR Registration Date: 13-05-2005 Posts: 477 Helpfulness rating:  the sounds in the begining are cool. The drums sound good.. That one sample is kind of annoying manipulate it more. yeah my only complaint is it should change up some more. I like the feel of it. You should give it a big growly bassline. It seems a little soft compared to the rest of the elements. It would sound good with a vocal just my opinion. Good work LATER 23-06-2005 02:03 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Bass could surely use a boost! Overall your sound is quite thin, doesn't sound full or warm at all... Just seems to go on a bit, but there's no real drive or hook to keep intrest... __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 30-06-2005 08:02 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » Paki - Fenomena