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dj eskay 
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 19-08-2003
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Please check out my new track 'a walk to the hidden tree' and post your comments here!!!
Haai !
Im back with another attempt to make something descent.
I hope that I get feedback on this one from dj's and producers .
I worked really hard on it ( I always work months at one track ) and i hope it doesnt get dissed blindly.
Very friendly greets !
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Stepping bass
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17-06-2005 11:56 |
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PassDa J.
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Registration Date: 16-05-2005
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Originally posted by dj eskay
Please check out my new track 'a walk to the hidden tree' and post your comments here!!!
Haai !
Im back with another attempt to make something descent.
I hope that I get feedback on this one from dj's and producers .
I worked really hard on it ( I always work months at one track ) and i hope it doesnt get dissed blindly.
Very friendly greets !
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Ok listen, I don't really like it, because I think the song isn't good enough because you worked a month on it but it doesn't sound like you worked a month on it, it's like you worked an hour on it ...
It's short too, outro sucks, continuous the same drumline ...
You got something in your mind but you didn't really put it in the song ...
3/10 Make it longer with more variation ...
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17-06-2005 16:47 |
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Emblem-X
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Registration Date: 10-11-2002
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hmm don't really like this one, siounds don't have the power they can have. like i told you, try to apply eq on your sounds, that'll do a lot!
for the rest, there's really nothing that draws my attention to this tune.. melodies aren't all that. yur drums are ok, but not special enuff t my taste, i'd say dld some breakz and start chopping and rearranging 
anyway the tune you send my yesterday was way better!
cheers,
emblem
ps. harsh comments from pass da J. 
if you think something sucks, you can aswell mention what u'd change imo..
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17-06-2005 17:31 |
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producer_pd
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Registration Date: 18-06-2005
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Didnt Rate it mate, Needs alot of work, Especially the EQin' !!! For a month it sounds like something id make in 5 minutes. Sorry but its my honest truth coming out
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18-06-2005 05:23 |
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Paki
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Registration Date: 03-04-2005
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Hmmmm...
Ok so I like the idea and the drums and the beats...
But i don`t like the dynamics of the tune...
It is somehow dull....
It isn`t melodic( in addition the melodies aren`t good)
Some more Free Filtering and mastering would harm???
But in general i like the idea and sthe drops...
Therefore I would rate this 7.5 from 10
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18-06-2005 14:48 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Cool track. I understand if your just starting out with reason. It can be extremely tediouse figuring shit out and as a result thing's take allot longer. At least youve got your shit on the go! Won't be long before your spitting out some killer track's. Keep Em Comin! Cheers++Stu Maggoo++
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20-06-2005 13:38 |
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burdy
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Registration Date: 21-08-2004
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i like what you've done with the track
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21-06-2005 18:48 |
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S.O.T.A.
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Registration Date: 13-05-2005
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the melodys pretty cool. That hardcore beat could be eqd a little better. You should throw some delay. The trippin out lines not bad. Reasons fun huh. That's all I use. I haven't learned anything else yet so it's what I use. You shouls come up with a bassline after the drop or make the line way more effected and louder. veryone here is going to say use more drum variations but I don't mind it. It's not a bad attempt. Keep em comin!
LATER
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23-06-2005 01:57 |
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