 Nick ZZ - You Have Been De-Voiced (KICKED)  |
Nick ZZ 
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Please check out my new track 'You Have Been De-Voiced (KICKED)' and post your comments here!!!
Had to re-upload, got a comment that it was too short, I made the track long, just my mp3 converter messed it all up and cut it in half... Z
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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Nick & Erina Z
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14-06-2005 01:00 |
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Victom#1
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Love your leads, interesting synths and a sick bassline. Definately suffers with the drums tho. The entire drumline sounds really hollow and empty, and never does anything very interesting. The snare roll at 2:28 brings out the poor drums even more. If you made that drum pattern more crisp and full, this would be one dope track.
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14-06-2005 01:21 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Victom#1
Love your leads, interesting synths and a sick bassline. Definately suffers with the drums tho. The entire drumline sounds really hollow and empty, and never does anything very interesting. The snare roll at 2:28 brings out the poor drums even more. If you made that drum pattern more crisp and full, this would be one dope track. |
Appreciate the review and advice, will work on drumz. Z
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14-06-2005 01:47 |
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TechDiff
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Wow really pushed the boat out on this one didnt you.
The dirty bass line is nice but obviously a sample. and the drums sound like theyre coming from next door.
You obviously listen to Far far far far far far (far) too much STANDARD DNB. and you really need to listen to some other genres and expand youre horizons.Im sure that most producers are influenced by other musical styles than the one that they concentrate on.
This tune clearly needs some (Lots) variation but the occasioal drum fills are good.
You really need to work on developing youre ideas because no one is gonna listen to 4 minutes of this!
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30-06-2005 19:10 |
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Greyone
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I love the creepy intro. Track isn't convincing me this time (other tracks from you were better) and the sounds have to be masterd (drums need to be freq. up and stuff) . And put some variation in the drums cause they're a bit repetitive.
Sorry to be so harsh but i'm honest. 
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30-06-2005 21:58 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by greyone
I love the creepy intro. Track isn't convincing me this time (other tracks from you were better) and the sounds have to be masterd (drums need to be freq. up and stuff) . And put some variation in the drums cause they're a bit repetitive.
Sorry to be so harsh but i'm honest.
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It's cool, you are right, this track needs some love, I wish to put the time and energy into the next. Thanks for the review and your honesty. Z
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