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broadside broadside is a male

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Please check out my new track 'Whorsmen Final' and post your comments here!!!

this is just the touched up and completed version of summat i uploaded earlier. its a bit of ajokes track, mebbe a bit aphroditesque . . . certainly not the kind of track i usually aim for, but i like it so . . .

added a few new basslines and laid it out a bit better. enjoy, and let me know what you think Bigup

(oh yeah and apologies to DJ Jimmy C for blatently copying his punidge, albeit accidentally Big Grin

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by broadside: 11-06-2005 17:15.

11-06-2005 16:58

Politix Politix is a male

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ok-as you may have guessed, I'm a beginer when it comes to producing so i'll focus on the ideas in this review...

I like the intro and the rap sounds good. There's a cool reggae feeling to it.
the drop is simple but effective.

I not too into the melody and the loop is very busy for my taste. The bass is great but I can't hear the kick at some points in the song.

there's a good groove to the song but I constantly got the impresion it was a bit too busy.

I think this song would benefit from a second drop (where you could maybee put some more reggae into the song cos it's a good idea).

thanks for the listen
Politix

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11-06-2005 18:06

D2o

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hey!!!!!
i'll see you in court!!!!! Big Grin

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11-06-2005 20:24

D2o

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i review will follow when i can get to a computer with audio capabilities and comment on your resent fiddlings

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11-06-2005 20:39

Stutterstep
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Cool track, different but thats not a bad thing.

I like the b-line, melodey is cool,

The mix is off. sound distorted, i would re-mix this and bring very thing down.

Nice track!!!!! respect Bigup

11-06-2005 23:47

Nosrac Nosrac is a male

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Intro sounds really bright. Synth that comes in after is a bit too FMish. Vocals are spread nicely and drums at about 2:00 sound up front and snare throughout sounds punchy.. Bass drum needs more punch. Some blaring - the stuff at 3:20 SOUNDS BIG AND FULL. I think the bell sounding synth takes away from this sound - dry and simple. Nice track - I like the hip hop tip despite the copywrite issues - still a good track. Big Grin

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12-06-2005 15:06

S.O.T.A. S.O.T.A. is a male

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what's up thats a pretty cool intro man. That rap samples cool. Sounds good after the drop turn up the drums a little as well as the sample. The bassline is good. Yeah thats a cool track. Whoa i really like the second break should have kept it goin a lttle longer woops here it comes again cool.
LATER

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12-06-2005 23:07

D2o

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nice intro just turn the bass down a bit or filter it in the intro cuz the vocal gets lost.....
not too keen on thestretched part of the voacl, but thats more my personal taste.....
that high pitched thing is cool but mayby too loud or needs a little eq to let the bass breath, u could mid outta bass instead.....
at that bit at about 1:50, you should switch the bass up abit mayby do the same as you do later by droping the top sound to it....

i like this a lot a strong idea that needs tweakin'....
good to hear decent use of a hip-hop accapella, than hearing one where the tune don't fit with the vocal....
great tune
big urself up Bigup

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13-06-2005 10:52

broadside broadside is a male

mentalist

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safe for all the reviews Bigup

14-06-2005 16:33

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